Please check out my poem...I'll return the favor

  • Russell
    20 years ago

    Please have a look at "A Divided Society" I would like some feedback on it and where i should improve.

    Thanks and I'll return the favor as fast as i can.

    -Russell-

  • Truest Lies
    20 years ago

    Okay. If you have time please comment on
    "How Do You Want To Die?"

  • xDryTearsx
    20 years ago

    Sure
    If you would could you read either "hope" Or "Our broken bond" :) thanks♥

  • Michael D Nalley
    20 years ago

    ANGELS IN HEAVEN