some new poems finally

I've had writters block for the past month, and then last night it was brocken and I wrote four new poems just like that. They are somewhat different than my earlier ones so I'm very curious as to the reactions they get. So if you could read any (I'm not asking for all of them) of the following I would greatly appreciate some honest comments (I would rather "I hate it to the core of my soul.. and why" than "great job 5/5" if that is how you feel) I will return the favor thanks.

-Please Consider My Maturity
-My Belief
-Time Itself
-The Memories Of Another Wasted Life

I'll be glad to read and comment honestly. If you could read some of my poems I would appreciate it so much, I dont really care which ones but I would like to see what you think about "The Girl" any others r good. Thanks

Sure. I'll read all of them. Could you please read "When The Real World Starts To Crumble..." ? + much more?

Those are interesting titles.. I think I'll like them.