Will Double the Favour...

Ok. Well, I am really needing to read other peoples work and get inspired and learn some new techniques - or any words of advice someone may have. I really want to improve to be the best that I can do, and for that I need harsh critical comments wherever they are needed.
My offer is: Whatever number of poems you r/r/c on mine, I will double that number and r/r/c that many on yours. (please don't go crazy and do all of my poems, being as for me to read 100 poems would be incredibly unnecissary, I'd do it to stay true to my word, but I ask you (beg you!) not to do that many lol.) However, no matter how many are done, I will double it and will appreciate it more than words can express.
Please be honest, and critical, I really want to move up a step in my writing, and I can't write more until I know what I should be focusing on...
Thanks lots guys. -stefhy