Nomination Contest

  • Drew Gold
    18 years ago

    Love by JHarrison:

    A dog barks
    eyes widen
    sliding hand
    between hand
    between side
    and sides
    inhale
    a door opens
    choke stale air
    staring eyes
    between walls
    between iris
    and between irises
    the water flows
    toes clenched
    electricity surges
    between flesh
    between water
    and water
    burns
    the light shines
    body silent
    burnt smell
    stifled gasps
    distant lovers
    dead body
    water flows
    burnt flesh
    two hands
    between
    one hand
    around the
    exhale

  • Drew Gold
    18 years ago

    Here's the one time posting someone else's work isn't in the context of 'plagiarism,' and everyone scatters. Weak.

  • Falling Up
    18 years ago

    These Pretty Little Things (song) By FavoriteMistake....

    i really liked this poem/song.. it made so much sense and instead of sulking over loosing a boy, they wrote about the exact opposite. it gave me a new perspective. i loved it...

    *****

    I throw away whats left of my heart, dont need it anymore
    I dont want something in my life, I just cant control.
    Ive never fallen in love, only fallen out.
    My lifes just another broken season
    I loved you, did I need a reason?
    Oh, your so damn picture perfect.

    I think ill just sit back and watch you drown
    In all your pathetic attempts and lies
    You can die at my feet
    And I would just stand back and watch
    And then youd be the one asking me why

    Its all so clear and black, my artificial night
    Like an arrow on dreadful wings
    Do you feel what there is to loose
    Why did you lead me to another dead end promise...
    To cry those lonely nights with unhappy tears
    Bringing back, those forgotten fears.
    Now its you thats going to lose

    Two days happy,
    The rest of the time sad,
    So hard to let go,
    Of something I never had.

    These pretty little things,
    these pretty little lies
    The pretty things you are
    is everything I despise
    your just so little in my mind now.

    And youll be asking me why

    Feel the pain of my yesterday (let it bleed your blackened soul)
    Can u feel what youve lost
    Youve lost my forgotten heart
    But ill find a way to yours
    Ill shatter it, poison it
    Watch it slowly die

    And youll be asking me why

    And you wont bring me down..
    Ill be the memory you dread
    The memory youll die to forget
    (Just like I did)

    These pretty little things,
    these pretty little lies
    The pretty things you are
    is everything I despise
    your just so little in my mind now.

    Your smile is still calling out my name;
    Even though it is only a picture inside a frame;
    You meant so much to me but you'll never know;
    You still mean the world but Ill never let it show

    I didnt want to love you
    I didnt want to care
    why would u make me feel this
    when I didnt want to

    but ill find a way to your heart,
    ill find a way to your heart.
    Ill let it bleed a crimson red
    I hate myself for staying so long,
    Letting you screw around with my head

    Ill be the memory you dread.
    The memory youll die to forget
    Now its you thats going to lose.
    Your going to loose.

    And youll be asking me why.
    Do you feel what there is to loose

    These pretty little things,
    these pretty little lies
    the pretty things you are
    is everything I despise
    your just so little in my mind now.

    And youll be asking me why.
    Like an arrow on dreadful wings
    Do you feel what there is to lose?

    Oh, your so damn picture perfect in my mind.
    Did I really need a reason?
    I loved u like the changing of a season
    There really is no reason.

    Those pretty little lies youd die for.
    And Im stuck screaming asking you why.

    These pretty little things,
    these pretty little lies
    the pretty things you are
    is everything I despise
    your just so little in my mind now.

    And youll be asking me why.

    Did u feel what there is to lose?
    These pretty little things. These pretty little things

  • JJ
    18 years ago

    you practically forced me to post a poem for fear that I may be considered "weak" or selfish...haha

    one I just read today,
    Civilized People by Atomic

    A violent act against racism,
    That is not who I truly am.
    I am the shepherd who will lead,
    All my fellow sheep and lambs.

    Follow my footsteps into,
    A world of multi-colors,
    Where there's no difference,
    In who I call my brothers.

    Don't fight back to nonsense,
    Being who you are is strong.
    If you rise your fist to them,
    It is you who is dead wrong.

    Show them you're not different,
    You can be civilized people too.
    Just because your skin is darker,
    Doesn't mean they can harm you.

    I have a dream that one day,
    Black and white will be just colors.
    It can't determine who we are,
    To the Blacks, Whites, and others.

    Dr. Martin Luther King Junior,
    That is who I am and can be.
    Your identity can be your name,
    If you just join this march with me.

    Don't sink your pride that low,
    And follow what they have done.
    If you just continue marching on,
    You can stop what they've begun.

    If my life ended this very day,
    No regrets would be on my part.
    For I'll know I've done what's right.
    By listening to my beating heart.

    I had a dream to end this racism,
    And my dreams did come true.
    Now if you don't fight back,
    You, my friend, can dream too.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • Drew Gold
    18 years ago

    My life is now complete. =D

  • Marjan
    18 years ago

    A Special World
    by Josh

    A special world a special place
    Void of problems, time, and space
    A place to be happy and never be sad
    A place without anything driving you mad
    A place that is reserved just for two
    Reserved for the love between me and you
    A place without worries, a place without pain
    A place not to fancy, actually plain
    A place where all that matters is love
    Flying so free like an elegant dove
    I wish so bad that that place could exist
    With all of my heart, I don't ever jest
    And just think if we could live in that one special world
    Together, me and you giving it a twirl
    Taking a risk, taking a chance
    Almost as if in an embarrassing dance
    Living in that place of perfection and right
    I wish that we could with all of my might
    To live in this place so good and so true
    We'd never worry about what not to do
    We wouldn't feel grief, or pain, or sorrow
    All that would matter is your love on the morrow
    And though this world seems so strong and so sure
    Its actually fragile, soft, insecure
    Easily broken by two main
    It was you who chose to unleash the pain
    You cannot destroy something so beautiful and pure
    And so I'll wait in that one special place
    Covering the tears that roll down my face
    In that special world that has faded away
    Leaving no trace of the tears on my face.......

  • Marjan
    18 years ago

    Life is like a candle
    by Dan

    Life is like a candle
    slowly burning away at the unseen
    but when will the flame die out
    and what will happen in between

    wax drips like blood
    and is forgotten when it meets the end
    and it soon must die out
    just like nature would intend

    minutes pass like years
    in the candles life and ours
    whether it will be long or short
    in seconds or in hours

    when the candle is first lit
    we are first born
    how long will we live for
    until we are burnt and torn

    as we get old and weaker
    the candle loses it strength
    but one thing is unsure
    the time or the length

    but in some ways we are different
    we first grow then deteriorate
    the candle burns away when first lit
    a flame to determine our fate

    souls are like smoke
    coming from deep within us both
    they drift and wander
    leaving no time for growth

    life is like a candle
    we all must die and fade away
    the flame has burnt right through
    and i have melted today

  • Lexie
    18 years ago

    HOW COULD I FALL IN LOVE WITH SOMEONE WHO LOVES SOMEBODY ELSE
    by Amanda

    Love is a special thing between two people. So how could this happen to me?
    How could I fall in love with someone who loves somebody else?
    I know how I feel is just not right, you belong to her and I can't change that.
    So why can't I let you go? Is it cause every time you touch my body I can't help but to fall deeper and deeper.
    The thought of what we do makes me sick. So why can't I stop doing it?
    Is it cause you say you care and that you will always be there.
    Is that just a lie you tell me so I wont go.
    In the moment I feel like we are two people in love, but when you leave and I know you go touch her the same way you touch me.
    It makes me hate every moment I have with you.
    The thought of you making love to her the same way you make love to me kills me deep inside.
    To know that i'm not the one you love hurt like no other pain.
    So why do I put myself through this pain?
    Is it my heart playing games, making me want to believe that one day you will be mine.
    My mind knows so different, you will never be mine.
    Its like a fight I could never win. Like a storm that will never end.
    I know I need to get out of this place I am in.
    I try to run from it but I get no where but back into your arms.
    When will this end. Will I ever stop loving you? Will you ever stop loving her?
    I wish someone could tell me, how could I fall in love with someone who loves somebody else?

  • Void
    18 years ago

    By Illuminati

    My heart leads me to endure again the ghosts of yesterday
    The reminder of seasons and years, the hosts of yesterday

    Thoughts are riding out, blasting thunderbolts and lightning
    Evoking what had been concealed, the boasts of yesterday

    Wind raging, sorrows of clouds pouring down their misery
    Ripping out memories anchored to the posts of yesterday

    Lost love streams in all directions, flooding my dreams,
    Waves of yearning beating against the coasts of yesterday

    But darkness parts as the Sun rises from heaven's vault
    Spreading mercy on my soul, onto the toasts of yesterday
    --------------------------------------
    It's about time someone brought out this idea. Hehe, tis great! Anyway, the poem above is written by a favourite of mine: Illuminati (I'm always forget how to spell it though, so I am definatley gonna check afterward) And that poem written above is a 'Ghazal'.

  • JJ
    18 years ago

    by apathetic soul

    No one left and no one came,
    All has changed yet all's the same.
    Spinning in reverse we fall,
    Caught in quicksand, one and all.

    Fleeing on a rounded track,
    Running though we still come back.
    Circles wind us back through space,
    Unaware, our shadows race.

    Memoirs chase us through the past:
    Futile dreams that didn't last.
    Loneliness, greed, love, and guilt
    Flashing by the lives we've built.

    Emptiness is all we know,
    Memories of long ago.
    Giant hourglasses spin:
    Time reverses, we begin.

    Caged in history's remorse,
    It's too late to change its course.
    Circles ever small we make,
    Drowning in an echo's wake.

    No one left and no one came,
    All has changed yet all's the same.
    Spinning in reverse we fall,
    Caught in quicksand, one and all.

  • Drew Gold
    18 years ago

    ^ always liked that one..

  • Little Dot
    18 years ago

    The Boy Who Loved
    by Tortured Soul

    There was once a boy who loved
    He was happy and joyful
    He had everything he wanted
    He was in love with the most beautiful girl

    But one day that all changed
    She got into a car accident
    She died because she got hit by drunk drivers

    After that day the boy stopped loving
    He had no feeling of happiness
    He started to see everything as wicked

    He began to hate everyone
    Life didn't feel like living anymore
    And so, the boy who loved
    Took his own life

  • Little Dot
    18 years ago

    Attack
    by Devin

    They come in numbers
    Spreading everywhere
    Killing all they see

    Burning and destroying
    Everything in their path

    In the dark of the night
    They begin with a new village
    Taking apart everything

    Burning down the homes
    With the families still inside

    As they take it all apart
    They grin dark smiles
    Across their faces

    They feel so powerful
    Knowing nothing can defeat them

    The demons move to the last house
    When they walk in the door
    They see a little girl
    Curled up in the corner

    One walks over to the little girl
    They demon looks into her soul
    Seeing her darkest secrets

    Seeing how she is beaten and abused
    And how she prays to die every night
    The demon picked the girl up
    And sucked the life out of her

    All the demons left and burned the house
    They left the village

    Now they are waiting
    For the next time to go and kill
    With no mercy

  • Grotesque Angel
    18 years ago

    Can I post song lyrics? (Not from P&Q)

  • Grotesque Angel
    18 years ago

    Well SOOOOOORRYY lol. ummmmm howabout.....
    Candle of Death by Lady Vengeance

    Burn the candle to the wick
    fleeting demons make me sick
    Why do they ignore his rule?
    to do right can be so cruel

    i see this hollow, dark abuse
    don't try and make up an excuse
    the candle flickers, almost goes out
    this fear i can do without

    screams unheard will go ignored
    "save me" i now begged my lord
    the shimmering surface breaks
    dragged down by all of my mistakes

    lying at the oceans base
    i can clearly see your face
    i watch your smile begin to crack
    walk away and don't look back

    clawing at my last chance
    above me drops of moonlight dance
    if only i could lift my arms
    i can't, the surface remains calm

    i now will cry my last tear
    and slowly watch it disappear
    as it merges into my grave
    i realise, i was your slave

    surely now my flame has died
    the candles wet from tears I've cried
    never again will it light
    candle of death, you've won this fight

  • EoB
    18 years ago

    JHarrison - Wooden Horse

    Today I saw a horse
    In the woods,
    Leaf mane
    Rustling
    In a closed
    Window
    Breeze—
    How free, how free
    I thought
    To be
    A horse
    In the trees

    When then
    The horse
    Began to
    Neigh
    And
    Biliously
    Proclaim
    That to be
    A horse
    Of the trees
    Is to
    Be a horse
    Continually
    Lame

    Then
    I looked
    With dismay
    At his
    Hoofs
    Slowly decayed
    And felt
    Coldness
    From inside
    Pulled out a gun,
    Shot
    And watched
    Till he died
    And all the
    Sap ran from
    His veins
    For as free as it is
    It is no fun
    To be a wood horse
    With nowhere to
    Run.

  • blank
    18 years ago

    Story of a Girl
    by Sarah Drew

    Let me tell you a story
    It's about a girl
    Who is afraid to feel

    She is scared to use her emotions
    They make her feel weak
    She wonders what people would think of her

    He would laugh at her
    He would not want to be friends anymore
    She feels so lost inside

    She wants all these feeling to stop
    She doesn't want this hurt any longer
    What is wrong with this poor girl

    She is now like a rock
    Numb, mechanical, and uncaring
    She has lost all her feelings

    Next time you see this girl
    Staring out into the blue
    Remember, he did this to her

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    I nominate my sis, Layla!

    Shooting Star
    by ~*Weeping Wolf*~

    So many memories
    Of a friendship shared
    So many ways
    You showed you cared

    Old friend, I miss you dearly
    And wonder where you are now
    Our last words were forgotten
    For I don't know why you left or how

    We used to play make-believe
    Together every remembered day
    But now the memories have faded
    into the past of yesterday

    How long has it been now?
    I can't even remember
    The last time I saw your face
    Before you left forever

    Your smile welcomed me in
    As I reminisce on when we met
    Your eyes, so young and sweet
    You the friend I won't forget

    I've tried to contact you
    But you would never call back
    I hope you still remember me
    For your friendship I still lack.

    I wonder if your dead, or alive
    Another friend gone and past
    Sometimes I fear the worst
    Wish at least one memory could last

    I cry and think of you
    A friend that I once knew
    Shot through me life like a Shooting Star
    But sadly, it seems you've soared too far

    I look up to the sky still hoping
    I will see you again some day
    But in my heart I know it true
    That you are gone and away

    Like a shooting star, though me life you flew
    Over and in my life, Too fast you went by
    I will forget you and your dreams never
    But we never had a last hug or last goodbye

    Ya, you shot through my life like a shooting star....

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    haha todays FRIDAY hahaha

  • Marjan
    18 years ago

    I don't know if it's accepted if I post this now but anyway, I really enjoyed it so I wanted you to
    enjoy it too.

    A Sonnet of Heartache
    by Roh

    A dream, a dream, it was only a dream
    So vivid, so false, so real it seemed
    A place and a time where all was still
    A though in mind, for her to fill
    She, a mystery, yet so knowing
    Let me close, and thus exploring
    The love for her I thought I had
    A love, who those think is mad
    Sitting side by side, yet sigh away
    An hour or so, then part our ways
    And leave me here in different Hells
    To remind my love has done me well
    Under an ocean; sinking while breathless
    Lost in a desert; searching while endless
    Embalmed in flames; burning while knowing
    Freezing in snow; sleeping while hoping
    That mine angel wouldst appear
    In this, mine dark winter-fear
    And then she comes, with things on back
    Graceful she flies, on wings of black
    And she carries my soul away from me
    Away, away, for all to see
    She has her prize, she has her claim
    She has my heart, she has it tamed
    And while this angel took my soul
    She turned her head and looked me so
    In her eyes, did this I see
    A love of which cannot be
    Then I woke from painful hells
    And only then did I tell myself:
    A dream, a dream, it was only a dream
    So vivid, so false, so real it seemed
    A place and time where all was still
    A heart of mine, for her to fill

  • ShadowDancer
    18 years ago

    this is a poem by Rusted x Heart

    Xiomara

    Watch as the folding surface
    Bends the lonely light,
    A vanishing emotion,
    Out of mind and out of sight.

    A drowning cloud in its reflection,
    Where the dead mermaids lay,
    Never altogether,
    Always one, it goes astray.

    The ripples of redemption,
    Born from but a tear,
    Amidst this sea of solitude,
    Fate has brought her here.

    The nymph of seven waters,
    Collecting liquid pain,
    She tidal-waves emotion,
    For there's nothing left to gain.

    i love this poem!!!!!!

  • Marjan
    18 years ago

    How about this?
    I'm not a fan of love poems. but I liked this one.

    Life is Sweet
    by Josh

    Let me not say that I love you,
    Although you know it is true.
    That phrase has been so much aboused,
    Misunderstood and over-used.

    Let me say rather "I think you,
    Breath you, taste you, feel you, dream you"
    That you make each day complete,
    And life has never been so sweet.

  • ShadowDancer
    18 years ago

    ive anouther! is that ok? well here it is!!!

    graffiti skys
    by Wings of Flames

    The tension upon the faces part,
    The scarce beauty and twinkling lights,
    The tide is in and the hearts are sharp,
    The stars burning upon the nights,

    The waves ripple time a graceful saint,
    The laughter behind the cosmetic masks,
    A friendship holds the popular taint,
    The liquid dined on captured in casks,

    The bottles of courage are drunk at the local pub,
    The grotesque hide in their houses of wax,
    The enemies are coming in their lethal sub,
    "You're going to die" is sent by fax,

    March us unto our suicidal grunge,
    Rip us to our stand and let the bombs fly,
    Into the shallow we start to plunge,
    Salute the Captain when the end is nigh,

    We have to respect the ones who rape the young,
    Deprive us of our future with agression,
    The deranged are imagining the old songs that were sung,
    It won't matter, those who survive will die of deppression,

    The gown of the young maiden stripped from her frame,
    Graduation was so long ago,
    But of course they feel no shame,
    He gives her one last sacrifical blow.

  • JJ
    18 years ago

    Congratulations Winners!!! :)