60 Minutes Of Fun (Damage That Can't Be Undone)

I would like you to check my newest, yet i think it's my best, poem... And i appreciate HONEST comments & ratings about it... It's called "60 Minutes Of Fun (Damage That Can't Be Undone)".
I will rate & comment in 3 of your poems if you do so :-)

Thanks loadz rob xx

I'll go read your poem. xD

read it

liked it

commented on it

if you want to read some of mine,

Alone
Red Bear
She loved him to the end

those are the 3 i think are my best

I read your poem. It was excellent

Done =0) Please comment on:

Today
Answer this please
Dearest sweetheart

Thank you so much