Hello, I am new here...

I just wrote my first poem...but I didn't save it...so I had to rewrite it. I posted it and featured it. It is not as good as the first one, but could you please give me some feedback?
My cousin said it ((the original)) made her cry. =\

Thanks to everyone who reads and gives me feedback ^_^ I really appreciate your help and support!

i'll go look too :)

Thanks guys! I really aprreciate this support...I showed the poem to some of my friends. I got a really weird reaction. I don't know why. I really don't think its the contents of the poem as much as the fact that they don't really understand poetry.

meh, I don't know =\

Thanks for your support ^_^

It was a really good poem. I've done that before, showed a poem to a friend and in turn recieved a very different reaction.

Sure, I will read it right now...

All right, done!
Please comment and rate any of mine..
Thanks a lot!