honest opinions and critiques needed

I've got a bit of new material that I could really use some feedback on, because some of it's rather different from my usual style.

They're called:
fly free with me - an attempt at a sonnet (shudder). I always try them, and they never turn out right. I could use some guidance here, especially if you're familiar with the form. Even if you're not, your opinion is always valued.

styrofoam remix - don't let the weird title scare you off. It's really not *that* cryptic. More of a normal style for me though.

a series of memories - definately different for me, use of this style was inspired by another poem I read a few days ago. It's a rather different concept as well, relying almost entirely on images.

I sincerely hope you can take the time to read one, two or all three of these and be brutally honest with me. Efforts will not be unrewarded, of course! I will certainly return the favor.

Well, I'm not the most experienced writer - especially not in the sonnets area. They're scary for me aswell lol. But I would be happy to see what you have to offer with as many as I can (hoping that none are love poems or friendship poems - being as for some reason, I always get signed out of the account while trying to r/r/c those ones). Going to do so right now :)