Funny Poem...

Hey, I was wondering if you guys would like to check out my first funny poem and tell me what you think. It's called, A Night On The Town. I will happily return the favour if you want me to r/r/c on any of yours. Just leave a note below. Thanks so much :)

umm, thought I'd letyou know, I got 3 of your poems. I really liked your work, and love to comment, so I had to hehe.
But for anyone else that comes along tonight, I'm off to bed right now. I give you my word, that if you check out atleast one of my poems (even if it's not my funny one) that I will return the favour first thing tomorrow. I may return the favour doubly... And if I really like your work you could get on my favourites, as I am looking for some of those :P. Have a really nice night! (or day or morning, whatever it is where you are) Best of luck with everything and anything, stay happy :)