A tear, a smile or a frown......anything is welcome

  • Wings Of Flames
    18 years ago

    Hey fellow poem competetors!

    Any poem is welcome
    doesnt matter what it is

    xxXXRuLeSXXxx
    ~1~must be your poem
    ~2~one poem per author
    ~3~because i cant think of any other rules; dont do anything i wouldnt do
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    *.::.*
    *.::.::.*
    * .::.::.::*
    **..::PrIzEs::.**

    *1st* ~ will receive 5 comments and 5 votes plus a place in my favourites.
    *2nd* ~ will recieve 3 comments and 3 votes plus a place in my favourites
    *3rd* ~ will receive 2 comments and 1 vote
    *4th* ~ will recieve 1 comment and 1 vote

    Have fun and get competitive
    Em

    *Wings*

  • Loulou
    18 years ago

    12 years old she would die
    by Tabby

    This is a story of a girl who died but had no choice
    But that might have changed if she had raised her voice

    Baby girl born in mid July
    Who didn’t know 12 years later she would die

    At 5 years old her parents were in a fight
    Her daddy saw her watching and put his hand around her neck real tight
    As she gasped for air
    Her mother stared without a care
    As she started to get dizzy he let her go and turned around
    She set they’re gasping her face was blue
    She tried to talk but there was no sound

    It took her 2 days until she had finally spoken
    But when she did she told herself I’m alone and broken

    Oh how this was true she was alone
    And how the last years of her life when she was in bed
    She would cry and moan

    At 10 years old she ran away in pain
    Her mother hit her, her father beat her
    She would never be the same

    At 11 years old for no reason she got cursed
    This time her dad hit second and her mom hit first

    This happened to her nearly every day
    By this time she knew she would never be okay

    So on her birthday she killed herself and died
    She gave herself her own little present when she committed suicide

  • Tim Bradshaw
    18 years ago

    i seen you again today By: tim Bradshaw

    I seen you again today,
    You're someone I don't want to know,
    You disgrace the meaning of the human being,
    Yet you still will not go.

    I hate having to see your face,
    Knowing the hatred you have brought.
    I can't stand knowing what you've done,
    And the ignorance that you've taught.

    I want you to leave me alone,
    You're every where I turn.
    You need to go where you belong,
    In hell to rot and burn.

    Don't think that I can ever forgive,
    The wrong that you have done.
    Even though you say your sorry,
    And that is was out of fun.

    I seen you again today,
    You are my biggest fear.
    I'm taking this rock and ending your life,
    You're dead! I broke the mirror.

  • ♥*~»cutieladybug«~*♥
    18 years ago

    Brave little me
    by melissa

    I though I could stand on my own two feet
    and be the brave little girl everyone thought I was
    face life and all its ups and downs
    and never show any signs of fear
    Who was I fooling when i though I could

    Im angry at the girl in the mirror
    the weak girl staring back at me
    who cant get back up and try again
    when shes fallen and skinned her knees

    She feels like life has fallen short
    and abandoned her on its way
    like the whole world has turned its back on her
    and shes not welcome to stay

    So emotionally she mutilates herself
    and cries her silent tears
    just pleading for an angel
    to fight away her fears

    And as I stand here looking in the mirror
    and wipe away my last tear
    I force a smile onto my face
    A mask which i must wear

  • xDryTearsx
    18 years ago

    "Hope"

    Why won`t they accept
    The fact that I`m not she
    The little girl
    I used to be

    That shy young girl
    With a voice so small
    Never said a word
    But her smile said it all

    The little girl
    That stayed so tough
    She never cried
    When things got rough

    The little girl
    Who belongs to my past
    The little girl
    They said grew up so fast

    As time went by
    And life got bad
    She felt she lost
    The heart she had

    She felt all alone
    On her pillow she cried
    Because apart of her
    She felt had died

    Soon her emotions
    To much to take in
    So she painted her wrists
    With suicides sin

    She almost gave up
    Until one founding day
    Her angel appeared
    And convinced her to stay

    He gave her the hope
    She needed to find
    He gave her the love
    So sweet and so kind

    I can`t thank him enough
    For loving me the way that he does
    For being the hope
    That nobody else was.

  • Marjan
    18 years ago

    Warm embrace
    Sweet face
    Shining so bright
    A beautiful sight
    15 years ago
    He told me
    I had to go
    To somewhere else
    I didn't know
    I was in tears
    Couldn't think of
    Being away
    For many many years
    He cleaned my tears
    Put his hand
    On my heart
    And told me:
    I will always
    Be here
    So near.
    And smiled.
    A smile I'll
    Never forget.
    Then I came here
    Forgot his face
    Throughout the years
    But I know he's here
    With me
    Through thick & thin
    I have no fear.
    Trying to be my best
    Knowing here I'm just a guest
    Missing his
    Warm embrace
    Sweet face
    Shining so bright
    A beautiful sight

    By Marjan Nouhnejad

  • confused!! (Jenn)
    18 years ago

    The fight that changed our lives

    I hear the yelling and screaming
    I feel the vibrations of the banging
    I hear the screams of bad words coming
    From your mouth
    I hear you say I am leaving and not coming back
    You cant leave just like that you have kids
    What are you going to do for the kids?
    How do you think we will feel?
    Bet you dont even care
    Care that I am hear crying
    Care that you are about to walk out of 4 different
    Kids life
    But you didnt even think that we needed you
    That we loved you
    You leave with out saying bye
    Hear I am the oldest child
    Your first daughter
    Crying cause you are walking out my life
    Then you see me running after you
    Yelling mommy dont leave please dont leave me
    You stop and say Jenn I love you and all your brothers and sisters
    Dont forget that
    You drive off and just leave me crying
    Do you really love me?
    Cause if you did you will not have left me
    Now hear I am and Im needing a mom
    We all need a mom
    How is Gillian and Chloe going to grow up?
    With out a mom to go to
    Am I supposed to take that role?
    The role of a mother when I am not ready
    I walk back in the house and I look at daddy
    I see he is crying just sitting on the sofa and crying
    I bet you did not even know that this man loved you
    Loved you enough that the next thing I know is that
    He was getting in the car coming after you
    That day you did not come back
    But please do know that he is still looking
    Looking for you; he has not stopped and its been
    Over a year
    Mom where ever you are he wont stop looking for you
    Mom you were wrong to leave I was not ready for this mother job
    I was not ready to be on my own with out a mother
    You were wrong when you said that dad did not love you
    He does love you and thats why he is out till this day looking for you
    Mom we all love and miss you and we all hate that you left but we all
    Forgave you so please come back come back for the kids come back for dad
    Do it for the family I dont want the role of a mother when I am still in need
    For a mother and Gillian and Chloe including me needs our real mother around
    We need you mom cant you see that we all miss and love and forgave you for leaving but now we need you around I hope you see this poem because its coming from my hart and all I can say now is
    PLEASE COME BACK WE NEED YOU

  • Allison
    18 years ago

    Untitled
    by Alyson

    White faces surround me
    Forever frozen in their eerie light
    Darkness is around me
    This is the path they walk in the night

    Their thirst for blood controls them
    They know not what they do
    It drives them to do horrible things
    And not always follow whats true

    As they come upon me
    I do not shed a tear
    For they can't see through me
    I won't show them my fear

    They hold me in their tight embrace
    Then give my the kiss of death
    They whisper secrets in my ear
    As I'm getting ready to take my last breath

    But what they do next surprises me
    They give me the gift of life
    I am now immortal
    No longer dealing with my strife

    The next night I walk with them
    Travel this ending land
    For now I am one of them
    Sitting at their right hand

    ** I can't think of a title, so if anyone has any ideas please let me know.**

  • Anna
    18 years ago

    A strange story about a strange girl

    Here he sits not daring a look
    he's just busy reading his book
    I sit down like I always do
    face to face and reading too.

    But somehow I can't concentrate
    because of all the words that fade
    they all fade at a very slow pace
    graceful, past by his adorable face.

    Then each word become a man
    chatting, laughing, hatching a plan
    They buzz around till I can't see
    and suddenly cast a spell on me.

    I can't get him out of my head
    can't ignore just staring instead
    every move is stuck in my mind
    and also everything else I'll find.

    So I'm sitting, I'm not all there
    thinking of the things we'd share
    suddenly he looks up and I see
    his beautiful eyes staring at me.

    I realize how stupid I've been
    I panic and then become clean
    He must think that I'm insane
    so I just jump out of the train.

    I lie in the grass feeling tired
    But I leave nothing to be desired
    just chilling, staring at the sky
    satisfied, valuable time passes by.

    I wake up on a beautiful day
    my body hurts but that's OK
    I want to talk but I'm all alone
    so I stand up and go back home.

  • Little Dot
    18 years ago

    In My Dreams
    by Sarah Drew

    I fall asleep
    I start to dream
    My thoughts are deep

    I see him there
    He walks over to me
    He runs his fingers through my hair

    He looks into my eyes
    I look back into his
    My heart flies

    He smiles at me
    And kisses my cheek
    I'm filled up with glee

    He takes my hand
    We begin to walk
    We here music from a distant band

    It's beginning to become light
    Our time together is almost over
    I'm filled with fright

    He smiles and says goodbye
    He walks away from me
    I begin to cry

    Our time is done
    It's all over for me
    That's it for all the fun

    I'm now awake
    Tears are rolling down my face
    I begin to shake

    It's over now
    I'll get over this dream
    I just don't know how

  • Wings Of Flames
    18 years ago

    The contest shall end when there has been 20 entries
    thank you for your fabulous work its excellent
    good luck to all
    ;)
    *wings*

  • just a poet
    18 years ago

    When it rains,
    you are my umbrella.
    when there is a Storm,
    you are my haven.
    when my heart brakes,
    you put back together.
    when i cry,
    you wipe away my tears.
    when i break down,
    you build me from scratch.
    when I'm lost,
    you show me the path.
    when I'm confused,
    you help me find the truth.
    when I've given up,
    you give me new hope.
    when i stop the fight,
    you give me reasons more.
    when i fall in darkness,
    you become the light.
    when i turn to evil,
    you hold on to me with might.
    if i were to loose my life,
    you would replace it with yours.
    if i were to loose my mind,
    you would gladly give up yours.

    you are my best friend,
    you are the only one i trust,
    you are the only one who cares.
    i know for me you'd do anything,
    i know you'd destroy the world to find me,
    i know you'd tear the universe in search of me,
    and i want you to know i can't live without you.

    your my everything,
    your my best friend,
    but above all; you are..... my mother.

    *when does the comp finish?*

  • blank
    18 years ago

    Attack
    by Devin

    They come in numbers
    Spreading everywhere
    Killing all they see

    Burning and destroying
    Everything in their path

    In the dark of the night
    They begin with a new village
    Taking apart everything

    Burning down the homes
    With the families still inside

    As they take it all apart
    They grin dark smiles
    Across their faces

    They feel so powerful
    Knowing nothing can defeat them

    The demons move to the last house
    When they walk in the door
    They see a little girl
    Curled up in the corner

    One walks over to the little girl
    They demon looks into her soul
    Seeing her darkest secrets

    Seeing how she is beaten and abused
    And how she prays to die every night
    The demon picked the girl up
    And sucked the life out of her

    All the demons left and burned the house
    They left the village

    Now they are waiting
    For the next time to go and kill
    With no mercy

  • Tortured Soul
    18 years ago

    The Boy Who Loved
    by Tortured Soul

    There was once a boy who loved
    He was happy and joyful
    He had everything he wanted
    He was in love with the most beautiful girl

    But one day that all changed
    She got into a car accident
    She died because she got hit by drunk drivers

    After that day the boy stopped loving
    He had no feeling of happiness
    He started to see everything as wicked

    He began to hate everyone
    Life didn't feel like living anymore
    And so, the boy who loved
    Took his own life

  • Summer
    18 years ago

    A cage I call home

    Looking at my bedroom door,
    I don't know what I expect,
    You can't even look at me now,
    Since you've realized I'm not perfect.

    What did I do wrong,
    I did all you asked,
    My grades are A's, My friends are great,
    Somehow all that was masked.

    Looking at these four bare walls,
    What surrounded me as a child has disappeared,
    All my dreams went too,
    I was left alone with what I feared.

    No one was there to teach me how to cope,
    Instead I wore a disguise,
    Never showed my true feelings,
    Never cried at goodbyes.

    Looking at my bedroom floor,
    My head is bowed in disgrace and shame,
    I could take the shouting and the fights,
    But not the blame.

    I won't let you tell me this is all my fault,
    I can only be so strong.
    Your expectations are to high,
    When I fall, your shocked and I'm the one that's wrong.

    Looking at this four poster bed,
    Covered in pillows and sheets that don't come cheap,
    At night, in a pace when I should feel so safe,
    This is where I weep.

    When I dream at night,
    Nightmares replace my dreams,
    In a home where even family,
    Isn't what it seems.

    Looking up at my ceiling,
    Covered in clippings from a magazine page,
    A silent confessions brings tears to my eyes,
    "This is no longer my home, It has become my cage."

  • silhouette fairy
    18 years ago

    Oh child come fly with me
    by Just-take-my-heart-i-want-you-to-have-it

    Oh child, child why do you cry
    come with me and a way we will fly
    to the mountains and stormy seas
    we'll sleep in the grass and walk in the trees
    oh child, child come with me
    we'll sleep with the bunnies and fly with the bees
    we'll go away and see the sights
    then later take to the sky in our flight
    soar over the hills and the beautiful land
    soar with me so take my hand
    hold my hand, hold it tight
    soar into the sky and swim in the light
    explore the world before you get old
    when that come, away we will go
    we will keep on flying
    oh child, child why are you crying

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    I love you, but you always love someone but me,
    I love you through your bursts of acne.
    Without you in my life I feel broken and empty,
    Even if you've never loved me, you're all I see.

    She says she's in love with you,
    After just one day, it can't be true,
    I can say I love you, 'Cause I've liked you 16 months, time's no issue.
    When she's around you, does she unglue?

    Does she dream of you, night after night,
    Are you the only reason she remains in the fight-
    Called life? Does she write and write-
    Poems about you in darkness and light?

    Does she post them all over, for people to read,
    To give her the support that she wants and needs?
    Does she feel only with you she can succeed,
    Has she dreamed every night of you two getting married?

    And before bed each night, does she cry?
    Does she think that without you she should die,
    Does she love you half as much, I ask for a reply!
    Does love you even at your shows when you're drunk or high?

    Has she been to three of your band's shows in a row?
    And has she cried when you didn't show-
    At our chorus concert? Does she simply glow-
    When you're around her, this I'd like to know.

    So if she really loves you, she could say yes to ALL of these,
    She would be willing to climb over the Rocky's-
    Or over endless turquoise seas,
    Just to see a glimpse of your face, to put her heart at ease.

    All of these things I've done or, I'd gladly do,
    Just to get you to love me too.
    I'll wait forever, since patience is a virtue,
    I'll wait forever to hear the words "I love you"

    This is a promise I'm willing to keep.

    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • Amanda Bee
    18 years ago

    The Creek
    By:Amanda Bee

    Lying on a grassy hilltop, they gaze up into the sky
    Boy and girl, hand in hand, age sixteen
    Looking into a sea of sapphire, downy clouds floating by
    Surrounded by a blanket of wildflowers and evergreen

    He picks a delicate yellow daffodil, places it near her head
    She sweetly blushes, then they playfully roll down the knoll
    Whirling, spinning, circling colors of yellow, green, and red
    Laughing with dizziness as they reach the creek below

    Enveloped in the sound of the water's gentle hiss
    Tiny, cerulean, translucent waves rushing by
    Their reflections upon the surface, mirror virtue and happiness
    Curiosity of a budding love sparkles in their eyes

    Dipping their bare feet into the frosty water as it swiftly flows
    Cool, crisp moisture encircles their exposed skin
    Feeling the massage of the current weaving between their toes
    Auburn branches dancing softly in the wind

    She plucks white lilies from the grass, ties them stem to stem
    Making two little flower ringlets, sitting next to the stream
    She places the adornment on his finger; one for her, one for him
    Promises to one another, under the warmth of sunbeams

    They cross the shallow creek, splashing over the smooth stones
    Reaching the majestic, old oak tree dwelling on the other side
    He uses a pocket knife, carves their initials; hers then his own
    In the brittle bark, encased in a heart, their love shall forever reside

    Face to face, lip to lip, under the magnificent oak tree's shade
    Engaged in love's first kiss, so tender and so meek
    A crimson line drawn across the sky, the sun begins to fade
    A spectacular moment perpetually engraved beside the creek

  • Loulou
    18 years ago

    THERE IS 21!!!!

  • Lil_poetry
    18 years ago

    Behind Closed Doors
    by Lil_poetry

    As I sit and reminisce about the year when I was just nine I instantly go back to the point in my life when my innocence was no longer mine

    An older family member of mine, was my baby-sitter each day
    Known as the only little girl in my family at the time, I was only nine years old, I swore to him this story would never be told
    There is no way to evade the past so now I put my fears aside and finally I have something to say

    The touch of his hand made me want to die
    The sound of his voice made my nights full of endless cries
    He would say dont worry just be quiet and sit
    But deep down I knew he was full of shit
    He constantly kept me traumatized as a child
    He always had a way of convincing others that I was a strategic liar
    Scared to death to tell anyone I just nodded and smiled

    I couldnt understand how, why he would force me drop to my knees I would beg and plead for him to let me go constantly crying please
    Each time hoping to GOD someone would open that door to the room filled with such painful encounters
    But it seemed as if no one else existed in the world just his devious ways, my countless resistances and my persistent prays
    He would force me to provide him with orgasmic pleasures
    And would punish me when I wouldnt fulfill his sexual measures

    I would go home each day feeling like trash from the bite marks on my breasts to the point of me feeling depressed
    He made me believe that no one cared about me from comments like Whos going to listen to you, you are just a dumb little girl who lies Deep down I questioned what if I tell someone that he is touching me in inappropriate places from my non-developed breast, to my sensitive vagina, to my inner thighs. They are going to think I am exaggerating. I thought.

    I wish I knew that he was just manipulating my mind and soul. But how could I handle this at just nine years old. For years I have felt like I should be punished for this unforgivable sin.

    Its eight years later and I question how he sleeps at night, knowing that he molested his baby cousin when she was only nine and he was thirteen.
    So what do you do when no one knows of this terrible ordeal that took place 8 years ago? Till this day I am still carrying the burden of what goes on behind closed doors, one day I pray that this door will somehow vanish

  • Wings Of Flames
    18 years ago

    IM SO SORRY
    I FORGOT ABOUT THE CONTEST
    THE JUDGING SHALL COMENCE ASAP
    IM REALLY SORRY
    GREAT WORK THOUGH
    ~wings~

  • Matters
    18 years ago

    "Life Through You" by Matters

    Colors fade into the web,
    As all the dreams and hopes will ebb,
    What’s set upon the bank of worry,
    Is set upon the bank of fury.

    Weaving close, tight to knit,
    Doused with flame relied on wit,
    If nothing else but dark can win,
    Then what is there to douse the sin?

    As the needle, along the flow,
    Is timed to over under go,
    And like the wind throughout the trees,
    It never stops to hear her pleas.

    So fade along the balanced plight,
    To hear the arrogance of night,
    And if you let the colors die,
    More uncovers than a lie.

    Barricade the blacks and grays,
    Purify the life you’ve made,
    To signify the blood you’ve bled,
    Dye the weft and warp blood red.

    If blues and greens, elusive sound,
    Are broken out and laid on ground,
    And all the hues of richest gold,
    Will die and watch their corners fold.

    Transfer what the warp has left,
    Take the threads off charring weft,
    Burn and scorch the time to be,
    To prove what not remains of me.

    Take the ashes thrown away,
    And take them down a street one way,
    For they are not the worthy souls,
    Of what has happened to my whole.

    Take the stains upon your hand,
    And listen now, you’ll understand,
    For what is left is left to have,
    And make my rid being live somehow.

    Of all the scars for memory,
    Become my brand name legacy,
    Mold my face, my mouth, my ears,
    Sculpt my nose to fight your fears.

    Complete my features, all but one,
    For these are what can see the sun,
    What love can see and not can lies,
    Leave my face with all but eyes.

    And with my eyes, use your gift,
    Your power to the ashes sift,
    Take them, listen, make them real,
    Make them my emotions feel.

    Add in flecks of gold and black,
    All but pupils, which I lack,
    Blues and greens and whites and reds,
    Bring in life into the dead.

    Once you make me my own eyes,
    Give me strength to realize,
    For I am you, created by,
    More than ashes in the sky.

    For with my eyes, I will see,
    More than just a life, my free,
    I will see through every soul,
    And this will make my being whole.

    I have lived through someone else,
    And they made what I made myself,
    And through this time, I know I prove,
    I achieved my life from you.

  • Loulou
    18 years ago

    when are you voting??

  • Wings Of Flames
    18 years ago

    Im really sorry
    Ive been heaps busy lately and forgot about the contest
    ......so sorry
    thank you for your enteries but i dont have time right now to do it
    i hope you can forgive me for not sticking by my word and finishing the contest
    unfortunately ill have to start a new contest later
    cya round
    SO SORRY
    *Wings*

  • Tara Kay
    18 years ago

    thanks, that would be good