More of a challenge

take one of your love poems, and rewrite it from the point of view of the opposite sex.

that is a challenge lol

I had to rewrite an entire story from teh point of view of a boy

thats funny because i already have done that

I'll try:) Sounds fun

after a few people are interested i will post mine unless you would like to see now

That's Creepy ... thinking about it ... I wanna try!!:)

here is my poem for 'Shadow I Was'
See if you can figure out what HIS secret is.

IMRU?
Well im sorry for the bad news but i hope that you will heal
but i know that i must admit this isn't the way i feel.
for i live in a shadow also and NO one has a clue.
between us this will never work, because i cannot love you.
i guess that i must tell you, just giving the reason.
but please understand and dont act as though its treason.
i stare at my loves each day but they dont realize, because it isnt 'normal' how i look through my eyes.
you see i guess im not normal, for how i love is 'wrong'
but i cannot help the way i feel because ive felt this all along.

((Original))
Living in a shadow, forever watching you.
I am in love, and it kills me how you have no clue.
Now I'm coming clean, of my deepest thoughts .
If u don't feel the same way all of this was for naught.
I've liked you for the longest time, and I have mentioned nothing.
so now these wonderful words are what I am now admitting.
my friends know all about you and how I really feel,
if you don't feel the same, I don't know if I can heal.

My story is called "One Boy, One girl" You can read it here http://casey15.deviantart.com/ It goes back and forth between the boy and the girl.

is he a homosexual?

yea((if youre talking to me)) its based on a true story and you have been, so far the only one who has gotten it. Congrats! lol.

thats what i thought, but i was afraid it was too obvious... actually, I don't know what I was thinking.

Hmm, all my love poems are remarkably androgynous. but, writing from a boy's point of view, I do that often.

Wow I was right about him being a homo ... guess i just knew from expirience but hey .. if you're straight and you can still wright it like that then good job cuz thats hard :D