Heart Broken Competition

BEAUTIFUL
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YEARS OF MY LIFE HAS PASSED ME BY
WALKING ON THE EDGE OF THORNS WITHOUT PAIN,I DIDN'T EVEN CRY
CAUSE MY HEART HAS SUFFERED A LOT OF PAIN BEFORE
SUCH PAIN THAT I CAN'T BARE ANYMORE
THAT'S WHY I'LL NOT WALK THE SAME WAY I WALKED BEFORE
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IN MY LIFE EVERYTHING WAS SO BRIGHT AND CLEAR
I LIVED MY LIFE IN HAPPINESS WITH NO FEAR
I DIDN'T CARE ABOUT MANY PEOPLE WHO COME AND GO
AND CALL THEMSELVES FRIENDS WITHOUT BEING SO
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AND OTHERS WHO SAY WE WILL STAY FOREVER
WE WILL STAND BESIDE YOU FOR NOW AND EVER
BUT ONE LOOK IN THEIR FACE AND YOU COULD ONLY SEE
THE EYES OF THE DEVIL THINKING OF ONE THING ...
THAT IS BETRAYING ME ....
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ONE DAY I SAW THAT GIRL WALKING BY
I NOTICED HER BUT SHE DIDN'T SEE ME,I DIDN'T KNOW WHY ??
MAYBE BECAUSE SHE WAS LIKE THE MOON IN IT'S BEAUTY
AND SPARKLING LIKE A THOUSAND STAR IN THE DARKNESS OF THE NIGHT
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SECOND TIME I SAW HER WE MET AND TALKED
I LOVED HER FROM THE FIRST WORD,I FELT FROM MY HEART I WAS ROBBED
WE SHARED SOME TALK AND WE SHARED SOME LAUGH
AND I FORGOT EVERYTHING I HAVE EVER HAD
MY PAIN AND TEARS SEEM SO FAR AWAY
AS THE CLOUDS WERE GONE IN THE CAME OF THE SUN RAY
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AFTER SOME TIME WE REALIZED THAT WE HAD FELL
IN LOVE OR WHAT REALLY WE COULDN'T TELL
BUT MY HEART WAS FILLED WITH JOY,NO MORE SORROW
I REALLY DIDN'T CARE WHAT HAS HAPPENED YESTERDAY AND WHAT WILL COME TOMORROW
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SUDDENLY , EVERYTHING CHANGED IN MY LIFE
NO MORE HAPPINESS JUST SOME UGLY WORDS SHE SAID LAST NIGHT
WORDS THAT COULD KILL OUR LOVE FOREVER
NO MATTER HOW MUCH SHE WOULD HURT ME SHE DIDN'T CARE AND SHE HAS NEVER EVER
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SHE BETRAYED .. YES .. THE ONLY HEART
WHO COULD GIVE HER THE KINDEST LOVE IN THIS WORLD
AND LEFT WITH HER BEAUTIFUL SMILE ON HER FACE
WITH NO REMORSE WITH NO DISGRACE
HE'LL FIND ANOTHER ONE IN HER MIND SHE SOLVED THE CASE
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DARK CLOUDS FILLED MY SKY ONCE AGAIN
NO SUN , NO MOON , JUST SOME COLD RAIN
I LOOKED UP HIGH WONDERING WHAT WOULD I SEE IN THE SKY
ONE THING I COULD SEE CLEARLY IT'S HER SMILE WHEN SHE WAS SAYING GOODBYE..
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so there is no winner i suppose?

~David

BIGGEST MISTAKE...

Why did u do this to me?
do i look fool to u?
I never wanted forced love
do i need to tell u too???

You made fun of me,
and took me 4 granted.
You uprooted our relationship ,
which i had planted.

You gave me the pain,
i never supposed to bear.
You made me alone in this world,
and not even bothered to hear.

How mean u r, how cruel u r,
its shame on me that i loved u.
Its like expecting from a stone,
that he will love u too.

My expectations will be ruined,
i never imagined so far.
You shattered my dreams so easily,
and left me with a painful scar.

Now u r just out of my life,
and let me live my life my way.
You will be the biggest mistake of mine,
and i wont forget it in anyway...

Only You

Only you can fix me
Heal this broken heart
Help me to recover
Piece back together what was torn apart

Only you can save me
From everlasting lies
Protect me from sadness
From selfish, cowardly suicide

Only you can hold me
And whisper in my ear
Tell me it will be ok
Bring me back from depression and fear

Only you can help me
Save my drowning soul
Turn my life around
Reset my game, change all my goals

Only you can dry my tears
But you don't know that I love you
And I just wish that you were here
Telling me you loved me too

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Peace. [Sole]

The loyal friend

A loyal friend I’ll always be
To those who earn my trust
And you have done this oh so well
But trust me now you must

So now you tell me what you think
And I can see the hurt
As you recall the girlfriend
Who of your sins has learnt

You tell me how you do not know
Why it means so much
To gain back her forgiveness
And feel her loving touch

You tell me how you never had
A better friend than her
And suddenly it’s me who cries
And things become a blur

This is your pain and your problem
So why am I upset?
And then you say you love her….
Then with blood my arms are wet

Attempting to cut out the words
And justify the pain
I love you, but then you love her
And so I must refrain

Composed again and in control
With her your heart will mend
And now I’ve made my toughest choice
I’m still your loyal friend.

"Broken Hearted"

As I sit here in the darkness all alone
All I want to do is pick up the phone
I want to call your house and see if you are there
I know someplace deep down inside that you still care
I want to see your smiling face
I want to feel your warm embrace
I want to feel you lying next to me
I want things to be back to the way they used to be
I want to look deep into your eyes
I want you back before my heart dies
I want to hear your voice and know you are o.k.
I want to tell you all the things I never got to say
Please I am asking you from the bottom of my heart
I can't stand us being apart
©Tisha

by *~vixen~* "Murder On My Street"

You told me you loved me
you said "its true"
you said "i will always love you"

but somehow i knew
it was not true

i said "do you really love me"
he said "that's what i decree"

you held me in your embrace
sending me to higher a place

we spent our time together
i thought it would last forever

me holding your hand
never knowing what you had planned

until it was to late
he sealed my fate

one day he left a note saying
"meet me at this place"

i had no clue
what he would do

i went to the park after dark
he stood behind me
his face lit up with glee

him wielding a gun
my life undone

him saying "i never loved you it was just a joke"
at that my heart broke

him turning around to a mound of dirt,
my eyes alert

he buried me there
without any air

i rotted there
for about a year

my hair going away
my fingers going astray

they never found me
that is where i live today

An Unborn Child

Do you cry for the life of an unborn child
Who’s face you have not seen?
Do you mourn a precious thing,
That has not yet been?
Do you spend months in sadness
Missing what you never got to know?
Wondering what he might have become
If he was given the chance to grow?

Do you stand at the park gates
And watch the children play?
Do you know what you lost,
What the doctors took away?
Do you stare at the empty cot
And the tiny sheets never slept in?
Knowing the child would have
Dreamt of thing he might win.

Do you remember burying him-
Such a small coffin- people all around?
Do you relive the pain each day
Of putting him in the ground?
Do you weep for him
Never taking a breath?
Knowing instead of birth
Came death.

~All Messed Up~

The worst is when you love someone,
as more than just a friend.
She teases you and flirts with you,
to you it's not pretend.

All her friends will tell you,
"I think she likes you too."
You'll knod and shake your head,
as if you already knew.

But, inside you are always questioning,
if to her it's just a game.
But, you're in love, it makes no difference,
to you it's all the same.

You sit with her when your alone,
and try to take things further.
No further than a hug or kiss,
and she's labeled you a pervert.

Now things are all messed up,
because you had thought wrong.
She didn't really like you,
you were right all along.

Sometimes, when you're in love,
you take things more to heart.
When it comes to women,
men have no clue where to start.

~Sean Dohr~

~No Emotions Shown~

Nothing sketchy, nothing fake,
no more lies, too much at stake.
Everything I say is real.
What I say, I feel.
Too much time wasted arguing,
too little time spent on important things.
I've let too many people slip away,
but this will all change one day.
When I find that one who truly sees,
all thats good inside of me.
But until that day I wait alone,
til' that day no emotions shown.

~Sean Dohr~

Is this ever going to be judged???

how long ago was this contest started? And if it was a long time, then once again I will judge.

Thank you, Joe

Alright, well I am taking the Job as the Judge once agian...This contest has alot of Poems therefore I am only Judging one poem per person, if you submitted 2 poems, the first poem I see by you, is the one that will be judged.

This will take a while, so please be paitent for the final out come.

Thank you, Joe

Ok, here are the winners.

(1st place) goes to David J Gossett for Broken Hearts

(2nd place) goes to obsessedgurl for It's Over

(3rd place) goes to Gemma Bishop for An Unborn Child

Congratulations to everyone that won. You all did an amazing job.

To those of you that didn't win, I'm sorry and better luck next time you all had great poems.

P.S. it will take a while for me to comment on the winners, I would also like to add a comment to everyone that had entered this contest for you waited long enough for the results. This may take some time so please be paitiant.

Thank you, Joe