A Challenge You might be able to handle CC&P

  • Steven Beesley
    18 years ago

    Bob, just a reminder, could you send Sunny some more of those chicken coupons, she's out! LMAO

  • Angie
    18 years ago

    oh whoopi, another challenge........

    PS Bob: Can you please send Sunny some more chicken coupons? She is out!

  • Steven Beesley
    18 years ago

    In His Dreams
    By Steven Beesley
    CC&P

    Note: This was my actual Valentime's Day, 4 Valentines ago!

    Dreams of Valentine's Day,
    chocolates and cards,
    Like a fairytale, a day
    with his sweetheart.

    Scent of fresh roses,
    a quiet stroll in the park.
    Candle light dinner,
    a room full of hearts.

    But sadly a dream
    as he awakes in his bed.
    In walks the nurse,
    "It's time for your pills."

    Limp bouquets adorn his room,
    the only greeting cards all
    read "Get well soon."
    There is no Valentine's day for him.

    All alone in his gloomy room.
    Hospital suppers are the only
    things to look forward to.
    An occasional visit but not this day!

    Solitary in the confines of his bed.
    Valentine's day, just a dream in his head.
    So dream on he will, away from his
    chocolate colored pills.

    Of a day of sweet song and wine,
    a day he can rejoice and dance all the time.
    Of ruby red kisses so Divine,
    from his sweet Valentine in another time.

  • Ann Stareyes
    18 years ago

    My Valentine (For 28 years)
    By: Ann
    CC&P

    When you asked me to marry you
    What a special day for me
    Tears of joy and happiness
    Your wife I wanted to be.

    The vows I said to you, I meant
    Till death do us part
    You swept me off my feet
    And you stole my heart.

    You walked every step with me
    Shared my happiness and pain
    You loved me unconditional
    I've loved you the same.

    When ever I needed you
    You were always at my side
    You'd wipe the tears away
    When they fell from my eyes.

    You always provided for our family
    A good man you truly are
    This is why I fell in love with you
    Right at the very start.

    So many thought we wouldn't make it
    But boy, did we prove 'em wrong
    Our love continues to blossom
    We know where our hearts belong.

    Just having this love that's so sacred
    Is the greatest gift of all
    Being honest and truthful
    Is the most precious gift I can recall.

    Another Valentine's Day we share
    I say to you with all my heart...

    I love you as much today
    As I loved you the day we met
    Happy Valentine's day, My Love
    A Precious Love We've Kept!

    True Love does exist, I am one of the lucky ones....dated my Husband for 3 yrs and been married for 28. I would call that true, sweet, LOVE!
    He's my Valentine Every Day!

  • Bill Turner
    18 years ago

    Valentines

    It is centuries old
    The lamest holiday
    Of the Hallmark mold
    It is just another day

    One day a year
    Flowers and a card
    From the person you hold dear
    Rest of the year emotionally scarred

    There is another way
    Shower them with love
    Each and every day
    On a pedestal above

    Live life with passion pure
    Love guiding your heart
    Give them your love as a cure
    Each day a new start

    Keep your romance alive and well
    Loving each other for life
    Spill your potion cast your spell
    Each day loving like a new husband and wife

    You need have no fear
    Show them a better way
    Forget about Valentines once a year
    Make each morning a loving day

    CC&P Rocks!

  • brittany
    18 years ago

    WHAT VALENTINES DAY MEANS TO ME

    Valentines Day is a day
    To celebrate love, passion,
    To share a candle lit dinner
    For two,
    Go dancing under the stars.
    Or to share a night of endless passion
    To sit on the bed feed each other
    Strawberries and whipped cream,
    Cherries. It’s a day to be with
    The one you love and be able to
    Sit in each others arms.

    CC&P

  • Melissa
    18 years ago

    A Valentine's gift
    CC&P

    Though the words are unspoken,
    everyone knows that love
    is being bought in stores today.
    Perhaps it's hiding inside
    the fragrant petals of a rose,
    a customer so proudly displays.
    Or is it a card that simply says,
    "I love you, today and everyday",
    a polite man asks a stranger?
    She watches the crowd
    searching for ways to speak
    in beautiful tongue
    what only the heart could possibly say.
    She couldn't resist the urge to stand up
    and address life's old question.
    So she takes a deep breath
    and with a little bit of dignity
    she pulls the answer out of her pocket
    and boldly says-
    "Smile a poem in her name,
    it'll do more than make her day.
    It will kiss away her lonely nights
    and love her, when you love her not.
    When she's finished memorizing
    your every word,
    she'll unlock her heart's chest
    and neatly tuck you away.

  • Kevin
    18 years ago

    VALENTINE RATIO 1/365

    Roses are dread and violets run through
    hearts and minds on such a day
    that come ye all for 24
    such as love for once is focussed
    and once for love all kinds agree
    even shops and cops so graciously
    allow for a day and do decree
    that Love is grand and should be free.

    FOR E.O.P!! YEAH!!!

    Satin...that was a hot offering..like...are single right now?...huh?
    : )

  • Angie
    18 years ago

    Well, I took a little different approach with mine, so here it is........

    Saint Valentine

    Here's the story
    of how this day began
    all in the name of love
    and one truly special man

    An Emperor said "no more marriages,
    single men must go to war"
    but this priest named Valentine
    would not turn away those standing at his door

    He performed weddings in secret
    for young ones in love
    until the day he was caught
    and in jail now sat this dove

    People came to visit
    bringing flowers and notes
    just to let him know
    love they do promote

    The jailor's own daughter
    became his special friend
    she visited him every day
    until the very end

    He wrote her a letter
    on the day he was put to death
    signed it "Love from your Valentine"
    now doesn't that just catch your breath

    So every February fourteenth
    as we celebrate with those we love
    remember to say thank you
    to Saint Valentine up above.

    CC&P
    WE ROCK!!

  • The Poetic Child
    18 years ago

    The Rose

    Id put my life one the line
    Just not to see you sad
    I will always call you mine
    I just love to see you glad

    If you ever had an ounce of hurt
    Id have a 100pnds of pain
    If you ever feel lower then dirt
    id be your shoulder to cry in the rain

    I will be your forever healing
    I'll be there when your in need
    And I know Love is what I'm feeling,
    Cause you wipe my pain when i bleed

    Baby I'm yours forever
    I'll make sure you never forget
    This relationship is forever
    Your the best I've ever met

    Ill send you a beautiful red flower
    and it has a deeper thought
    The Green for moments that were sour,
    Red for the battles we fought

    But in the end the rose looks great
    Because in the end were still Together
    Just goes to show you're my fate
    cause the rose stands tall,
    no matter the weather

    Your eyes shine brighter then the sun,
    and sometimes i stare and get lost,
    Thats how i know your the one,
    This relationship has never lost

    I love you so much baby,
    and i know i can get demanding
    but only you can save me...
    Remember..That rose is still Standing....

    Some may think this is not a valentines day theme..but yet it is...This poem shows through everything that he and she have been through there still together and lasting forever...on Valentines Day..We show our loved ones how much we love them and show them that no matter how bad things are they still feel love..I feel like this poem shows that...it shows how much i love my gf and also shows that thing may be un right but through it all i still love her...

    Great Poems Everyone....
    ~The Poet~

  • Kevin
    18 years ago

    Kristen, that was outstanding...and if you don't win....and if one of those puke poems win...you know the kind that George Orwell wrote about when he spoke of songs made up by machines to appease the dim masses in 1984....I will be most displeased.

    But yeah, this is calling out all the players, which is a good thing, even though i'm arrogant about quality..this feels lively..and with poems, thats rare in a social sense.

  • Kevin
    18 years ago

    Hey Satin,

    you got some nerve berating me for challenging the originality of the poems posted in this compitition by name calling, as if by being childish you elevate yourself to such a position whereby anything you say suddenly has merit.

    That is the second time you've insulted me without provocation. If you think I am being too harsh then say so in an adult manner, otherwise keep the playground mentality where it belongs.

    If anyone thinks my comment was out of line, and that most of the poems posted thus far are not generic love poems, then speak up. I support poetry in all it's various forms but i was under the impression one of the main reasons for this sites existence was the improvement of it's poets through comments and discussion.

    So lets discuss if need be.

  • Jacklyn
    18 years ago

    Little Fire

    Grow my little fire
    bigger than before
    Melt the wax again
    dance the night away

    Reflect upon my eyes
    a wild dance of love
    burning at my heart
    harming an ignorant touch

    Grow my little fire
    dance within the dark
    Provide a light of hope
    don't leave me like before

    ~Jacklyn (EOP baby!)

  • JJ
    18 years ago

    Valentine

    Post marked feb. 14
    sent across the miles
    or wrapped in a dozen roses
    covered in chocolate smiles

    tis the time of year
    when lovers show they care
    to that special someone
    in there heart
    they hold so dear

    EOP

  • The Poetic Child
    18 years ago

    Quick Question..I already have a poem on here for EOP..but im jst wondering..can we have more then 1?
    Just a Question
    ttyl, Good day all
    PeAcE
    ~The Poet~

  • The Poetic Child
    18 years ago

    oopppz my bad..i skipped it...Sorry For askin a stupid Question..I need some better glasses..Thank though
    PeAcE
    OuT
    ~The Poet~

  • The Poetic Child
    18 years ago

    alright i might do that..im not sure yet though

  • The Poetic Child
    18 years ago

    Today is the deadddliiinnnee

  • PnQ Mod Account
    18 years ago

    Great poems everybody! Another tough one to judge.

    Here are the winners:

    1. Valentines
    By Bill Turner
    CC&P

    2. The Reality of Valentine's
    by Nate Phillips
    CC&P

    3. My Precious Valentine (Etheree)
    By Bob Shank
    EOP

    4. Saint Valentine
    By Angela
    CC&P

    5. Blissful Intoxication (Acrostic)
    By Satin
    CC&P

    Again, excellent poems everybody! I loved the variety!

  • Ann Stareyes
    18 years ago

    Congrats....to the winners....great poems......
    I think everyone done an excellent job....some very lovely poems....

  • Steven Beesley
    18 years ago

    Congrats to the winners.

  • Angie
    18 years ago

    Wonderful job to all those that participated in this challenge, beautiful poems.

    Congrats to all the winners!

    Thanks for judging Ann Marie and thanks for selecting mine as one of the winners!

    woooooooooooooo hooooooooooooo

  • JJ
    18 years ago

    ^^aren't you guys excited? lol at least Bob's poem was picked ;)

    woooooo hooooooooooo CONGRATULATIONS Bill and all winners!!! beautiful jobs!

  • HOLLY ARMER
    18 years ago

    Congratulations CC&P and everyone who participated.

  • Kevin
    18 years ago

    Well done to everyone who took the time to get involved.

    Bold effort even.

  • The Poetic Child
    18 years ago

    Great job Every-one..I saw Tremendous Effort in Talent in each and everysingle poem on here..Magnificent Job
    ~The Poet~

  • Amanda Bee
    18 years ago

    Great job you guys:)