Recent poem i need of comments

I am in need pf comments on "My sweet little nephew"
I am doing a poetry book for a college project, and I really want to include this poem because it is close to my heart and I need some comments, to put into the book about this poem.
I will return the favour.
Please comment honestly, dont just write nice comments for the sake of the book.
Love Tara xxxx

Ok i will read it now =D

please r/r/c my new poem"Justice"