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  • David Marshall
    19 years ago

    please read this poem..comment and vote..if you read and comment this poem..i will read up to three of your poems..and comment and vote..i promise and garuntee you....thx i truely appreciate it

    Take care
    David

  • J Lau
    19 years ago

    Left comment on your poem. Great write.

    J. Lau

  • Sondos
    19 years ago

    Its brilliant I love the concept
    Well Done
    Sondos

  • Once an Angel
    19 years ago

    A brillant message to this poem as I have already said! Nice work. If you could read my poem farwell to fantasy I would be grateful and any other ones are up to you.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • authum darkness
    19 years ago

    yes! thank you so much. please read and comment on Codebreaker, Secret Code and The Other Side

  • David Marshall
    19 years ago

    im bout to go to bed..but i promise ill look at all your poems..it will be tommorrow though..ive been really busy tday...but anyone else who would plz comment and vote my poem..ill do the same for 3 of yours..keep that in mind..and be honest when commenting mine..i want real opinions..good or bad..if its bad..then tell me what i need to improve on..if its good..then well..explain why u think it is good..thx

    take care
    David

  • holly
    19 years ago

    yep i commented well done seriously that was really good

  • Sole
    19 years ago

    Nice, it had a really good reversal :)

    Peace.

  • Naima
    19 years ago

    really good! Well, you can read... Your Face, Evanescence and the third is up to you! Thanx! Your really good! Keep it up!