I HAVE A NEW POEM THAT I WOULD LIKE FOR YOU GUYS TO READ

What is the feeling that I feel inside, that makes me cry,look up at the sky and ask my lord above why? Deep in my heart its eating me away, try to shake it off but does it nothing, but stay. I say Im fine but truely I feel terrible inside, living my life a lie, hiding behind blinds, writing between the lines, HURT I am on the inside.

The words are great.

Interesting poem - the vocabulary is good, and the rhyming works but you should structure it a little better - rather than just a paragraph :)

Peace. [Sole]