Hey, Hey, Hey, 2 new poems

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    hiya,
    I have 2 new poems called "I wish" and "I promise", could you please please comment on them. I will return the favour asap.
    Lots and lots of love, From Tara-Kay
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  • Biscuit
    19 years ago

    hi i read and commented on both those poems, could u do 'but now i am found' and 'let there be love' please ? xxx

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    I've done them

    Anyone else to check out my poems, I will comment on double, if you comment on both of my newest I will comment on 4 of yours, if you comment on newest 2 and 2 more, I will comment on 8 of yours and so on

    love Tara-Kay

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    Elijah, I agree that my poem's were not that good, i didnt have much inspiration when writing them
    xxx

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    "Heartbroken", The new poem i have just submitted, check it out

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    "Without you", another new one. Please read them, i will return the favour asap, i will comment double the amount of poems you comment on of mine.

    please
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  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    have done them
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  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    anyone else, come on

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    come on, please.
    i'll rate and comment on double
    come on

  • enfant du tordu chagrin
    19 years ago

    Hi. nice pieces, i commented on both. could you read my latest two if you have time? Thanks.

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    have done ^
    2 new poems submitted today, check them out
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  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    Tonight I'll Light A Candle and if you haven't already read Intervention Divine

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    done ^
    they were very good
    xxxxx

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    thanks for the comments, Kaylee.
    By the way, The poem "Breaking my heart", it is meant to be about a desired love, a love i dream and want but can't have.
    just thought id clear that up