Just edited :: It's Okay To Die :: Please read..

I just finished editing my poem "It's Okay To Die

It would mean alot if people could tell me what they think. I will return the favour. Thanks

Okay love.

-Tainted Mikochan

Thank you =]

I really appreciated the advice you gave me. And it's okay, I didn't take one bit the wrong way. I just hope it's alot better now.

- Natalie