My Sad Love poem contest

~Where To Start~

The worst is when you love someone,
as more than just a friend.
She teases you and flirts with you,
to you it's not pretend.

All her friends will tell you,
"I think she likes you too."
You'll knod and shake your head,
as if you already knew.

But, inside you are always questioning,
if to her it's just a game.
But, you're in love, it makes no difference,
to you it's all the same.

You sit with her when your alone,
and try to take things further.
No further than a hug or kiss,
and she's labeled you a pervert.

Now things are all messed up,
because you had thought wrong.
She didn't really like you,
you were right all along.

Sometimes, when you're in love,
you take things more to heart.
When it comes to women,
men have no clue where to start.

~Sean Dohr~

True feelings...
by J. Lau

Please tell me that you never had any feelings for me...
That all that happened was just the sparse of a moment,
That you were drunk and didn't know any better.
Please tell me that you were confused because you were naive...
That you didn't know I waited a year for you to be in my arms,
That I was just too sensitive and thought too much.

Your heart lead you into my arms,
And found peace and comfort when we were one.
Your guard dropped and walls crumbled down,
With the feeling of security around me.
Your mind let you speak openly to me...
We were so compatible and meant to be.

I know I will never be his replacement,
And I know I don't have as deep of a place in your heart.
I may never be the spark that you were searching for,
But can't you see how treasured you will be?
If you know that one day some girl will be the luckiest girl to have found me,
And that you believe being loved is better then to love,
Why can't it be you when we almost started?

Please don't dream and hide,
Away from your true feelings inside.
You know deep inside that I agreed to step back our relationship,
Only to save this broken heart from completely dying,
And to be always there by your side.
Feelings that are present,
Cannot be forgotten and erased.
You will always have a place in my heart,
And that is the true feeling I had for you from the start.

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its abt how a frnd abandoned a frnd of mine...for no KNOWN reason, but there is a reason.

* I wrote this poem for a friend of mine. Not my situation, but his. Its like there is a girl who was his best friend and then all of a sudden stopped talking one day. No reason or explanation. She bangs all phonecalls, cuts cell phone calls, and has blocked him online. Isnt it a crazy world... *

FOR JUST A MOMENT
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For just a moment of the day
Please put all that hatred away
Pretend as if we were in the past
When we had a kinship meant to last

I cannot find the heart I once knew
Nor the old friend who had stayed true
Through thick and thin, protected me
From the pain of this world`s misery

There are wrongs that I have done
Teased and hurt so that I could have fun
And I`m not even asking you to forgive
But your utter silence has kept me captive

Just tell me where I`ve gone wrong
Sing me an end to this unfinished song
I may have bruised it all beyond repair
So just stab hard and make the last tear

The `you` inside me dies painfully slow
Tell me my mistake, please let me know
I`ll apologize until you scream we`re through
Then if I must, I`ll try to let go of you

But if, for some reason, you do not grip
This final wish of our dying friendship
I`ll let it die, with agony a few know
Who have lived to see their best friends go

These are words from the innermost part
Of the little that is left of my dying heart
If things do not change and stay as they are
I`ll suffer with memories refusing to go far

I`ve committed the crime of the century
I don`t know what it is, but still I agree
I really wish that we can be friends again
I don`t show it often, but I too feel pain

If you still don`t wish to reveal my crime
Then let me walk into the mists of time
I`ll travel far away and we won`t ever meet
But end it for me, make solitude sweet

Over again I`m saying the same damn thing
I haven`t really slept and my head is spinning
You mean so much, please don`t be mad
You were the best damn friend I ever had.

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Dhaval

i think it relates, because you can really love a friend, and even a friend can break your heart.

Sorry Stephany, I had forgotten I posted in your other one, and unfortunately neglected to notice that it had to be newly written. : ( Sorry for the mix-up.

~Sean Dohr~

hey stephany...im glad it qualifies...but you know what, i showed this to the girl TO whom it was written...and she just ignored it. damn. im sad...maybe the thing is really very unforgivable...(and my best friend doesnt no WHAT WRONG HES DONE...) but atleast she could SAY what was wrong. anyway, theres a reason for everything :) you take care, dhaval

Sorry... I thought we can use poems from the past as long as it was not used in one of your previous contests... Anyhow, I did write a new poem and changed my entry... Thanks!

J. Lau

ook here it goes

i lost you
fair enough
game over
and the worst part
it was my fault
i hurt you
and cause you this pain
im the one who can't see
you were meant for me
and now i'll never know
if you'll want my back
so on my knees i go
just to say one thing
i'm sorry and
could i ever have you back?

I can't believe we're over, but I don't know why,
You must've met the real me, when you stopped getting high.
I loved you through the worst, even when I got grounded for you,
Then you turn around and say "we're through".
What did I do, it was so sudden,
I loved you! We had SO much in common.
You've gone out with 3 girls since me,
That's shows you didn't really care, which makes me get teary-
Everytime, because I still love you,
I hope someday you'll love me again too.
I just want another chance, you were my first boyfriend,
As well a my best friend, but all good things seem to end.
I just want one more chance, to make things right,
I want to not cry everynight!
Please, just one more chance.

I wrote this while I was going, but am I allowed to add it to my poems now that I wrote it, or will that make me disqualified?

~*Who Cares?*~

contest over right? please judge :D thank you :D

jus make it go longe than
if u dun tho m i allowd 2 add mine 2 my thing?

Valentine's Day
by Silhouette, of something unimaginable

They sit together
on the lover's holiday
cuddling, and smiling
acting lovey dovey
he knows she wants to die sometimes
she thinks there might be someone else
they part in their ways
he goes to the one he loves
she to the one that loves her
she holds the cold metal, his photo
crying why couldn't you love me
like the way you love her
she holds the blade closer
thinking "walk the sidewalk"
she gets closer to her want
he now feels her pain
leaving his lover
he runs down the road
now she is thinking "no turning back"
the blade "walks the sidewalk"
now turning, it "crosses the street"
he reaches her house
tears running down their eyes
she clutches the note
he clutches the nob
just a second too late
she lays there motionless
kneeling beside her
he reads the note
"we both can't get what we want"
he knows, though no one else does.
he now belongs to her
she got her wish
but he shall not
that was her happy ending
but his sorrowful beginning

when are u goin to judge?