i'm back with a nex poem =)

well as i said i'm back :) and i wrote a new poem called:"Slipping Away..." i would really appreciate it if you could r/r/c it and i'll be sure to return the favor twice, just be sure to leave whatever you'd like me to read =)

ThanX

When past and present collide
Written With A Lover's Hand

sorry for the delay ppl, but i had some problems with my gf and school lol but i rated them and every single one of the poems i read just we're amazing :) keep writing all :)

Please could you comment and rate one of my featured poems.

Thanks, I hope everything is okay with ur gf and school...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

i will...and hope that you and ur gf are ok now.... please read any of my poems

I'll read, please read any of my newest poems. Thank you!

Please could you read "The breeze" and "Ultimate sacrifice"
Thanks

done :) i just realise that there are alot of talented ppl in here :) i mean it, i'm speechless... in a good way :) and yeah everything's ok now, except for the english teacher had me sent to the principal once again >.< other then that my life's back on track now :)