Two for One man

Ok hey people, I finally got off my butt and wrote a new poem. So anyways I would like you to read one of my following (preferably to top one.) rate and comment. I will of course double what you read, whether you read one or both.

- Dead and Buried (1)

- Damnation of "Sinners" (2) (please if you already read and commented this poem, do not expect reward, you read it in your free time.)

Note: please leave the names of your poems you wish to be r/r/c, it makes for a more orderly exchange and helps facilitate my reading by giving me an idea of which to choose.

Note: please leave the number of the one you read (number found in paranthesis next to the name)

Note: Thank you for stopping bye, I hope you enjoy my work.

I'll R/R/C both and probably end up doing some more anyway...Just pick anything from my featured and it would be greatly appreciated, I don't have any real preferences any feedback is great! Thanks! x

I did the first one you listed (1) can you check out the last poem i posted and let me know wat ya think..appreciate it!

Its called - Only A State Of Mind

Thanks