2 new poems, please comment

hey everyone,
I have just written and submitted 2 new poems.
Achieveing because of you
Four leaf clover

I would love it if you could read them and comment on them. It would be greatly appreciated and i will return the favour asap

If you comment on any other of my poems, just leave the titles of which ones and i will give you an extra 3 comments
Love Tara-Kay
x

The Rag Doll
You can pick the other one Tara-kay

I rated and commented!! I loved them!