i really need the comments...

i havent gotten any in a long time, and id like to know my stengths and weaknesses in my poems...critisum and good advice is great apreciated...thanks a bunch...

UPDATE TO THIS POST!

NEW POEMS UP...not very good quickly written after sol testing at my school when there was nothing else left to really do....check them out along with my old ones thanks to everyone who comments and reads them!

I commented on a couple of them! They were really good!

Looked at 2. I liked it.

You can look at some of my latest if you want.

Thanks anyway...I loved reading them...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Thanks everyone for all the comments and advice! you all made very good points and now i have plenty of ideas to make my poems better thanks to you! ...keep them coming! and i will go and check out and comment on everyone who commented on my poems, poems...much love morgan

thanks again