Read my poem: I will double yours

If you please comment and rate my poem, "The military man." I will double your comment, and I will leave honest comments, so please let me know what you want me to read.

Guess no one wants comments :)

Tehe.. I would do it for you.. But I've already done it =[

&& For anyone who comes across this thread. Read her poem damn it. It's really good. Worth the read!

Awe that was so good! I won't be surprized if thats one of the next poems that won the weekly contest! You can read any 2 of mine that you like :)

Thank you, I will read some of yours in a bit. Anyone else?

Left comment on your poem. Great write!

J. Lau

New poem: Forever the soldier's daughter

I will comment and everyone above in a few. Room for anymore if you're interested.

Reviewing the above's =)

Thanks :)

Woohoo!!! I just read the poem Kaylee,
I can't believe you snuck that one by me.
You are a very good poet, and I like reading your stuff..

I wrote a new poem today, about "Frederick the Great" check it out : )

Hey darien the "-" before the final lines in each stanza were just to make them stand out ^_^ and I will read yours when I get home.