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Hey..

I have a few poems I would like you guys to read.

"The Error in Terrorism "
"God Hears (Acrostic)"
"Dessert Before Dinner"
"Frederick the Great"
"This Is My Story"

You read: I read:
1 - - - - - - - - -3
2 - - - - - - - - -5
3 - - - - - - - - -7
4 - - - - - - - - -9
5 - - - - - - - - -11

So yeah, that's the deal :)
and I always return the favours. Just leave me titles, and I'll get back to you when I can!..

i commented on "the error in terrorism" please do any three that catch your eye.

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I've done them all.. Lol.

Thanks *Black Rose of Death*
I've finished all of yours.

Johanna.. lol, I ran out of poems to read :(
So I guess I'm done.

Thanks ladies.

Anyone else?..

I did two so can you do

His Interpetation, To be Broken, Lacking of a Title,Paint the Sky && No Longer Overdue?

Thanks,
[PygmyPuff]

I did the Error in Terrorism.

Done and Done.

Joys to read :)

PS. Allen, I sent you a private message. Let's debate? lol

Haven't got it yet, but I'm waiting =)

I read and coment and rate if u read coment and rate mine like u said. i only have five, be free to piont any ways to improve them and please be honest. and finally "I Hate Him" is abit crap and i soundd really jelous.

Done, I read them all. Was good try.

I did God Hears. Just read my newest one.

I read the Dessert one, where you had...well nevermind. If you can read "human nature" that would be cool. And if you want to read some others, just pick any other two, I really dont care.
ttyl, your friend Al...
PS beware of kitchen.

I commented on your acrostic poem, i was wondering if you could comment on any of mine, preferably the most recent one, On Silk Sheets

thx

i did all of them except "God Hears (Acrostic)", cuz i've already done that one.. hehe! could you do my latest four and any others you havn't done for the rest please and thank you! :)

Done Cayce..

Done ---Al---

Shawn, I'll have to wait for after work to read your last poem. (Can't read love poems at work)

Whew!!..

I just finished reading 9 of yours Jessy. Really good stuff.

Post a new one =[ Pweeeease. Lol

hehe, thank you for all the comments! keep adding more poems! i love commenting (your poems .. lol!) and i love getting comments.. :P

haha, I'll post something for you ladies by the end of the day :P

Darien I'll read some. You don't have to return the favor unless you feel like it :)

Ha! Thanks. I'm posting something soonish.

hehe, just wrote another one.. feeling very emotional today :P

Woohoo!! Thanks Kaylee..

my poems have been downvoted lately :(

I'llread two of them now and I'll vote :)

hehe, thank you for the comment! :) i thought beautiful would be like be-a-u-ti-ful.. lol :P

haha .. it's ok Jessy :P
that's why I'm here!

Lol, just don't down vote my poems Kaylee :P
I already have people to do that for me!.. lol !!

Anyone else?

lol don't worry I didn't down vote. Your poems are always awsome

I also sent you a private message, so you can understand the poems I wrote better.. or at least the parts you didn't get. :)

Anyone else?..

Ok.. I guess I will close this deal.

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