New poem

Hey everyone i've kinda had writters block for a while but I managed to write a new poem.. I think it kind of sucks but I just wanted to see what everyone else thought.. I'll return the favor.. just leave the name of the poems you want me to read and comment on. Thanks!

If you want to comment on either
The Flight Home
or one of my two newest poems, feel free.

i commented on yours, if you can read "human nature" I'd apreciate it, thanks. ttyl your friend al

Thanks for the advice guys. I just finished commenting on everyones.
I'll still comment on anyone elses.