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OMG I just wrote a new poem, Dangerous Dreams for a contest, but I submitted it just the same and I really like it. Can you rate it and comment it? Read the explanation beneith it, it explains how I developed it.

Then tell me what poem you want me to comment...Ill comment two of yours.

[PygmyPuff]

Alright I will.
You can just read: What hurts the most

Alright, if you could read my two newest poems, I'd appreciate it.

Done. =D

Could you please do:
`Promises Mean Nothing.
`A Day Without Rain.

And can you please rate too? It'd mean alot. Thanks.

`Taleee xx

I commented it! :) It was good.
Just read any of mine. Thanks a lot!