Dark and fantasy POETRY CONTEST!!

CLOSED CLOSED!

You know the rules: Pick a title
-Must be newly written
-Must be yours

1. Vampire Lips-TAKEN
2. Water Nymph-TAKEN
3. Castle in the Sky
4. Bleeding Hearts-TAKEN
5. Spirited away-TAKEN
6. Stranger of the Night-TAKEN
7. Dying Soul-TAKEN
8. Crimson River-
9. Falling Streams
10. Dark Light-TAKEN
11. The Last Breath-TAKEN
12. Engulfed in Flames
13. Pheonix's tears-TAKEN
14. Kiss of Death-TAKEN
15. Bloodlust-TAKEN
16. Forest Maiden
17. Last Sorceress
18. Werewolve's lust
19. Sinister Touch
20. Cold Heart-TAKEN

1st--7 r/c
2nd--6 r/c
3rd--5 r/c
HM--3 r/c

14. Kiss of Death

This life shattering kiss you've given me,
Has taken my life,
And stolen my soul.

With Black lips you approached me,
With a heart made of stone
You took what was mine,
And you made it your own.
You followed me, waiting,
For night to get dark,
Then pounced like a couger,
After my heavy heart.
This kiss I have taken,
And you've given in turn,
Has killed all my self,
And sent me to burn.
This kiss you have given,
Is gruesome at best,
But I can not give back,
This Kiss of Death.

*sorry it's a little repetitive*

GOOD job!

im gunna write the last breath by 2nite can i PLEASE reserve it?

OK!!

11) The Last Breath

He runs towards her, carrying a knife,
“Hello darling, I’m ending your life.”
She says, “Why, what have I done,
I’ve kept our relationship so fun!”

“Shut up liar, I’m sick of your lies,
No one will cry when I make you die.
I plan on taking this knife and killing you,
So goodbye darling, your life is through”

He stabs her in the stomach, as she screams,
“Soon this relationship will be just a dream!”
He stabs her again, over and over again,
No way for her to live, or write this down in pen.

Continues to stab, until she thinks she’s died,
He takes out the knife, aas he thinks of a good lie.
He walks out, yet she’s not yet faced her death,
A single tear falls, as she takes her last breath.

ooh, can i please reserve 1. Vampire Lips? pleasee?

#13 Pheonix's Tears

Fire and flight,
Taken anew as your soul is lifted,
Feeling no pain you soar,
Lifted by a force of life,
Yet, a pain is found..
Yet, your tears fall from the sky like rain..

Why do you cry when you seemingly are a godess?
Why, what hidden pain lies within your heart?
Why, why do you not tell me darling???

You fall from grace like a shooting star,
I'll never know what you truley are,
Ashes are left,
Not a trace.

Reborn.
A new existence without pain.
"Congratulations and welcome" said St. Peter

*Grotesque Angel*

#1 Vampire Lips

On this pitch black night
A shrieking cry is heard
The pale creature
Emerges from the shadows
And licks her vampire lips..

Eyes black like coal
Gleefully shining with
The urge to kill..
Painfully straight ebony hair
Falls over the colorless face
And sharp teeth protrude from
Those blood red lips
The lips of a vampire..

The terrifying creature
Carefully chooses her prey
Then pounces upon them
Slowly sticking her jagged fangs
Into the neck
And licking the scarlet blood
That runs from the bite..

But as the sun slowly starts to rise
The immortal creature
Hisses with anger
As tiny clouds of smoke
Rise from her departed body..

She darts off into the horizon
To come back
When all is shadowy and quiet
To once again haunt the night..
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hehe, hope you like it! :)

how many poems can we write? (it doesnt say in the rules)

I'd imagine 1 per poet.

5) Spirited Away

A story of sadness
and of bad luck
is the tale I tell today;
'tis the story of how
all of our children
were taken - spirited away!

The twelfth mark of midnight struck
and in crept Daniel la Fey,
the mysterious fiddler who earlier played
a concert without taking pay.

And as he walked through the city
he played a little ditty
to keep all his foes at bay.
Using a magic fiddle
he played just a little
of the gay song of Daniel la Fey.

He'd enter a house
eyes glowing red;
a word in their ear,
a mark on their head,
and soon the children,
well they were all out of bed
and were captives to his tune.

He played not for money;
what he wanted the most
was the souls of young people
to satiate his needs as a ghost--

Well this was a sad story
'bout that fateful day
when that dreaded spirit
known as Daniel la Fey
marched into town and
with his tune, led them astray
down to the graveyard
where he had his way
and stole our town's future;
he spirited all their souls away!

Can I reserve "Bleeding Hearts"

I should have it done soonish. =]

4] Bleeding Hearts.

Love is formed and hearts are wasted,
Crushed to pieces and torn apart.
Evil lovers stabbing their back,
Taking what's left of their black heart.

What once was love has turned to hate,
It crossed the line and turned to dust.
Bleeding hearts fill the entire room,
Leaving victims no one to trust.

Sitting alone in the bathtub,
Washing every inch of her skin.
Scraping away all the disgust,
Drowning in all her shame within.

Voices, Voices, Unknown voices,
Screeching and deafening her ears.
Bleeding, Bleeding, Crimson bleeding,
Taking her away to her fears.

That one deadly kiss went to far,
Torturing her body, Mind and soul.
Her bleeding heart lays in a grave,
But no one knows her life he stole.

Copyright © Natalie 2006

Number Ten...
~10~
Dark Light
by Just Rain (aka HeartzOnIce)

A cold kiss of lust, passion and desire
I pull away in fear
Trembling as torments surround me
Your intense gaze fixated on me, eyes like fire

Clutching my knees, gazing out the window
Waking up from a dream brought me to this world of stone
Frozen images, black and white, as an old photo
Having woken from a dream spun centuries ago

A spinning wheel with thread, like that of a spider's web
Running down victim's bodies, tearing all apart
Photos put under a dark light
Showing a world from long ago

The dark light that biddeth I to play this role
Bindeth to my legs, to consume my soul
Thou innocence bequeathes the evils in my heart
Evils hidden deep inside the dark light's unfathomed start

Here I sit, spinning
A cloth to hold the tales
Hiding in the closet's corners
Under the bride's own veil

Holding a light over my head
Spin till death will I
Till I see my dearest sweetheart
Pass yonder window by

Can I please reserve stranger of the night??

I should be done by about 5:15 ish or so!

**meggie**

-Stranger of the Night-

Stranger of the night,
with no face and no fears,
dreaming empty thoughts,
and crying dry tears.

Stranger of the night,
thinking of lost thoughts,
imagining old hope,
and no gold, just empty pots.

Stranger of the night,
carrying an empty bag,
nothing to call a home,
nothing to go by but an old rag.

Stranger of the night,
just tiptoeing along,
no words to speak,
just another rythmeless song.

Stranger of the night,
nobody to love and see,
just a stranger in the night,
until somebody finds me.

**Meggie**

Reserve "last sorceress" for me

Bloodlust

The bloodlust of a broken soul,
the wings beneath her coat,
Her eyes glistening like fire
as the liquid trickles down her
throat.

The darkish red tint of the
sweet drink brings fear into their eyes,
And though they run just to escape,
they cannot hide from their surprise.

The bloodlust of the girl who once
was a child in tears,
Now hides beneath the shadows
of the lost lonely womans fears.

*first time i have rhymed in a poem!*

Wonderful! Keep them Coming!

Dying soul
by Silhouette, of something unimaginable

She looks silently
out the window
at the storm clouds rolling in
although she loves storms
nothing can cheer her up
sitting silently
looking at his picture
she begins to cry
you should have never said yes,
yes, such a stupid word
ending all of your happiness
you sent him away
now he is dead
killed in a foreign place
her soul is dying
never forgetting
she cold have kept him home and safe
but slowly she loses control
not wanting to live
with her dying soul

can i reserve Crimson River please? i should be done soon

sure

2. Water Nymph

Her gentle movements,
Soft glides,
Whispers of truth,
Tenderly fine.

Her skin is a lucid pale,
Cheeks like fresh roses,
Body like a dancer,
Lips of a damsel.

While she sits upon a ledge
Her feet dangling, the water, her feel,
She tries to seek the answers,
Only few wish to reveal.

You could say her mind has slipped
Into the depth of the water below
People beg her to come out of her mind,
But that is the least she wants to show.

She wants to break free of this life,
Free of what she is.
For a mere water nymph is not her ambition.

But how could she do so?
Leave her people behind?
Go away into the real world?
Do what’s on her mind?

While she has the beauty of millions
The heart of coal,
She doesn’t see why she must be kept
In this water –deep water- hole.

Her face pulls up from her hands,
Long black hair falling within her face,
She’d do anything to escape, anything,
To get out of this place.

She didn’t think she was the only who felt this way.
There must be someone out there, who feels the same,
Locked inside a place where you want to get away.

But I have to break free, she thought,
I need to follow my foretold destiny.
The magic, oh the magic,
Thats burning deep inside of me.
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Hope you guys enjoy.

btw, did you get the titles for 3 and 5 from movies?

Yes, have you watched them before? lol

yeah actually, I loved Spirited Away... it's actually why I chose that title

I loved it too^-^ My little brother cried when the parents turned to pigs. lol

who is judging this one again?

Me

Probably 1-2 more days. Hurry and Submit your entries!!

20,cold heart

her selfish heart stopped beating
that moment in time i felt enormous joy
never have I wanted somebody to die more than you
your cold eyes full of pride
your smile, so big,so false
never have I hated somebody more than you
hate was the only thing you deserved
hate and disgust where the only things you got
with every word that you didn't say , my hate grew stronger
with every word that you did say, the disgusting feelings for you
grew and grew
yet you where so pretty, with all the beauty one could wish
a dream for the eye, you looked so kind
such a pitty , for that horrible behind
you could have made it all
if it wasn't for that stone cold heart

Good job! come on, a few more titles left

Oscar you there??

Oh, you guys make this so hard to judge,
There's gonna be ties probably

1st-Meggie33
2nd- -^-»TaLe3e AND Allanah
3rd-Sean Allen
Hm-Ravyn Lynn
Hm-Who cares
Hm-Jessy

WOO! I got second!!..Well, I tied second Lol. Thanks heeeeaaaps! congrats to the other winners. They were all GREAT poems =D

good job everyone

Congrads! Everyone did amazing, though.

Hm... I guess better luck next time for me.

hehe, thank youu! :P great job everyone!