~*Rave's poetry contest YAY*~

One more and three more days!!!!!!!!

ONE MORE ONE MORE ONE MORE ONE MORE! COME ON PPLZ!!!!!!

Hi. I swore I remember typing out the Mystic... oh well ^^ sorry. i'll make it up now... (thanks for waiting for me!!)

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The Mystic

Soft, sparkling shards of ice
Weaved with sleek slivers of moonlight
Invisible hands pressing both into the loom
Cold, powdery breath freezing all in its path

Whispers on seductive lips
A charm and curse combined
From the mouth drop diamonds
Tears trickle from the eyes like dewdrops from the sky

The door begins to creak
A visitor tracing the path of hundreds
Seeking a potion to cure their pain, want, and need
To fulfill their hopes, loves, and dreams

A tongue like crushed velvet utters words
Fatigued soul waiting for an answer in despair
Gold and silver jewelry jingle on their arms
New solutions are shared keep their client safe from harm

Tattoos of henna and ink alike
Grace their body, veil guarding them from light
Oblique staff spins, showing direction
Blood running to a cup of wine

"One drop of yours will clear your mind"
Whispers of lies and truth alike
Crackles of fire underneath the two
One figmentation of power and the room turns blue

Eyelids shut, a needle pricks
One red distribution and the room glows like candlesticks
Flying demons, ghosts, monsters, alike
Enchanted creatures haunt the walls, eating up the light

All is quiet, silk sleeves unfold
Money given, secrets told
Victim's heart tattered and sewn
Leaving through the door alone

The mystic laughs, another amusement
Days like this bring back happy reunions
Possessing the things that make experiences true
If you don't watch out, the next one might be you

it's okay, thanks for entering. And it's good too.

wait..still 1 more rite? plz sum1 just write the title! ahhhh

i more title or 2 more days... PLEASE PEOPLE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!

I would get down on my knees and beg, but I don't want to get my jeans dirty. LOL

It shall end tomarrow... or tonight at midnight, my time, if I get bored... YAY!!!!!!!!

or.. midnight COLORADO time, so that it's ten my time... BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!

My contest... so i can do that... teh heh

as Ally said... I RULE ALL!!! at least on this post...

forgive this, for boredism has truly set in.

lolnesseth... boredom is fun sometimes.

~!*~!*~!*~!*WINNERS~!*~!*~!*~!*~!*~!*~!*~!

This was really really hard on me, cuz they were all absolutly wonderful, so, (don't hate me for this) every place has a tie, so there's technically six winners... sorry guys, next time I promise I'll be more decisive...

anywho..

1st-~*ForbiddenEyes*~
HeartzOnIce
2nd-TaLe3e (sorry I couldn't do ur name right.)
~*Who Cares?*~
3rd-Allanah
Silhouette, of something unimaginable (did I get ur name right? Sorry if I didn't.)

and everyne who entered gets one r/r/c...

thank you sooo much for humoring me in my FIRST contest!

oh, and I'm gonna do the r/r/c/ right now... so umm yeah...

thankz again ya'll!!!!!!!!!

with lotz of love... for your poems,
RAVE!!!!

I started to r/r/c and i got three done for noni, but it's late so I'll finish up tomarrow. Sorry and thank you.

Yay! Thanks!

thanks and yes you did get the name right

WoOt!

ysy thnx so much:D

I got all of the r/r/c done for everyone. So umm yeah...

now you see that I have no life.

LOL

LoL