comments, please

i have submitted 2 new poems, and i dunno what i think of them, they arent the best, and i wasnt terribly inspired at the time, but i wanted to try out writing a poem or 2 about an object or place, from scraych. thanks, i'll return the favour asap

Sanctuary
My Diary

kk, i will
can you return the favor on these two poems?

Romances Sweet Melody
I Think I'm Falling In Love

Thanks, and I'll r/r/c your poems for you!

ok Ill comment.
I was wondering if you could comment on
love that was never pure
and I cant take anymore

Thank you very much

Tiffany