New Poem: *Drowning Lessons* 2 for 1

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Hey guys, wrote a new poem, based on an old poem I wrote. Haha, yeah. I had to edit it and change a few lines around, add another stanza and vvvvwwwwaaaalllaaaa!!!.. a new poem for you to read and enjoy.

    So can you please, R/R/C on it, and I will return the favour on 2 of your poems. It's called "Drowning Lessons"

    Thanks.

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  • Sean Allen
    19 years ago

    *off to read*

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    SEAN!!!.. it got deleted!!..

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Was there something in there inappropriate?!

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  • Melissa S. Masucci
    19 years ago

    Aw I was just on my way to read it.

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  • Sean Allen
    19 years ago

    errrr....

    something inappropriate...

    hmmm I didn't see anything... can you email me the text of the poem? you have a backup copy right?

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Aww! Is it there now? I wanna read it!

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Yeah, I have a back up copy.. I'll send it to you.

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    I didn't see anything wrong with it.. It's just an old poem I use to have.. I posted it once before.
    and back then it was kind of inappropriate, thats why I editted it. Hmm..

    I'm afraid to post it again..

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  • Sean Allen
    19 years ago

    I responded to your email.

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Thanks Sean. I hope it wasn't a copyright violation using the same title as a song. I even stated who I used it from. OH well..

    THE POEM IS BACK UP!!!..

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  • Sean Allen
    19 years ago

    okay, REread it and REcommented

    ;-)

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    I'l do it...

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Thanks Sean, I already commented on your 2...
    check the last few poems you wrote.

    :)

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Done...

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Awesome, I just read 3 of your poems. Old ones.
    I guess I feel like reflecting on the past today. Bringing back an old poem, and looking at other people's old poems. Lol

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Thanks... =)

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    anyone else want to give it a shot?

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  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    Naa my old poems are terrible. How about my new ones lol

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  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    there you go! :) my latest pleasee? xox!

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Lol I just read your newest song Kaylee, how's that for a head start :D

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Sorry Jessy, I'll have to read the love poem when I get home.

    OHHH MY!!!.. that reminds me!..
    I still owe you Kaylee!.. big time!!!
    haha, you must not let me forget !

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  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    lol alright. I had to do something but I'll finish yours now

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  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    hehe, okay.. :D but if you want, you can read one of the not "love poem" ones.. hehe, i dont really mind which you do! thank you for the comment!

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Haha, ok Jessy! I just did another poem instead :)

    and Kaylee, I will read 4 of your love poems when I get home, or get a chance. Friday night, gonna be out ;)

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Ok Kaylee, I got those lyrics done!! woohoo!!!
    Finally :D

    Good stuff!

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  • Once an Angel
    19 years ago

    That was brilliant, thank you for bring my attention to that poem, I was not disappointed.

    -Tainted

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  • ~Black*Rose~
    19 years ago

    Ok im off to read now could you please do my 2 featured?

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Done both of you :)

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  • holly
    19 years ago

    done, i loved it. please do with love from a friend who cares and Crying from the eyes and bleeding from the heart xxALLYxx

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