Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child
19 years ago
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please comment on my two new poems, "Happy Fathers Day, B******" and "Voices In The Rain" i really want to know what i can improve on in my writing, so if you have any suggestions, please give me some! thanks you guys! and i promise i'll try and comment on your poems as well! |
Melissa S. Masucci
19 years ago
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i RCC'd the father's day one and i'll get to the other if i have time tonight. :) |