it'd really mean alot if you could comment...

  • Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child
    19 years ago

    please comment on my two new poems, "Happy Fathers Day, B******" and "Voices In The Rain" i really want to know what i can improve on in my writing, so if you have any suggestions, please give me some! thanks you guys! and i promise i'll try and comment on your poems as well!

  • PygmyPuff
    19 years ago

    sure...
    Return the favor on one of my featured?
    -puppy face-
    [PygmyPuff]

  • Melissa S. Masucci
    19 years ago

    i RCC'd the father's day one and i'll get to the other if i have time tonight. :)