So, Do you want some honest comments?

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Well, you'll get 5 comments if you R/R/C my new ones.

    `Dancing In The Rain
    `Remembering The Forgotten
    `I Want You Back
    `From the heart.

    ..But, If you've done any of these, I'll +1 comment with each one you do. So if you do 1, I'll do 2. If you do 2, I'll do 3, And if you do 4, I'll do 5. And wahla, You have some comments. =) Please make sure you rate too.

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Tehe, Thanks MY1&only =D

    So cmon guys! You all know you want to =P

  • Melissa S. Masucci
    19 years ago

    I agree it's good stuff. I added her to my favorites.

    (Which, by the way, thanks for doing also. I wish more people praised - or even commented on - my stuff as much as you do!)

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Woo, Cmon people =D

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    I've done all four!!

    Could you read:

    "Lingual Delicacies"
    "Imitation in Slow Motion"
    "That Time Of Year"
    "Today"

    and you choose the last one.

    Thanks.
    Silver J

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Thanks Silver J. And also thanks for the advice about the comma's and capital letters. I'll make sure I remember that in the future. =)

    I'm off to do yours now.

    Anyone else?

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Mmkay, all done. =) I explained in one comment why I didn't do 'That time of year' I chose another one. Hope that was okay.

    Anyone else?

  • JAMIE
    19 years ago

    I did "I Want You Back" a few days ago and just did the other three. Really like your poems!

    If you could do these ones for me:
    Perfect
    Hopes for the Future
    Remembering
    Looking Forward
    and you pick the last one :-D

    thank you
    jamie

  • Once an Angel
    19 years ago

    You have a lot of nice work, I enjoyed reading your poems. Read which ever of my poems jump out at you as intersting and honestly tell me what you think. thanks!

    -Tainted

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Thanks. =) I'll do them soon. I just finished returning comments on my other thread. So I'll do these ones soon alright?

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    hehe.. i did three! :) any of mine please? xox!

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Thanks Jessy. I'm gonna start on all these now.

    And, So everyone knows. If you wanna comment my work. Do these ones. I'm not posting anymore at all. And I won't be coming in here either. =)

  • NannO
    19 years ago

    heya.. ive done 3 of urz coz i cudnt remember wat was the 4th :P.. but i got it now and im gonna go r/r/c..

    theyre reli nice, other than few grammatical errors, ur words were heartfelt and warm :D

    u dont hv to do mine or anything.. just doing it for the fun of it :)

    y arent u posting anymore? i read ur profile, seems bad.. is evrythin ok? hope nothing's serious..

    take good care of urself
    NannO

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    Why won't you be comming back here anymore

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    *crimson*regret*: Done your ones. =) good work!

    And, Thanks Nanno. I'll do some for you. I'll feel bad if I don't. Lol.

    And, I dunno. I was writing to vent things out. But it's not helping, it's just making things worse. So i'm gonna stop. But I'll still be on the site, and reading other peoples work.

    I'm gonna have a break though, And then I'll start on Tainted Mikochan =)

  • NannO
    19 years ago

    o well.. the problem is i noe how u feel and i cant tell u to do otherwise, so.. watever u see best for u, just go for it.. hope everything goes well for u.. i just hope ull be writing soon.. ur a great writer (hope u noe that)
    u deserve good things in ur life :):)

    take care sweetie
    *hugs*
    NannO

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Thanks NannO. *hugs* =)

    ..Mmkay. I've just finished Tainted Mikochan. I'll do some more shortly.

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Just did 4 for you Jessy! Very nice poems =P