New Poem: "Wedding Dreams" 2 for 1

Hey everyone,

I just wrote a new love poem called "Wedding Dreams". If you r/r/c on that poem, I will return the favour on 2 of your poems. Just leave me a comment right here, so I'll know who wants the deal :P

thanks!

urgg..why did i comment the poem! :P

hehe, I already got your new poem :P
haha so we're even! :D

I did a few before you posted this does that count lol

Oohhhh!! I've already done it. =(

yupp.. :P i guess soo.

hahaha .. ohh man I win!..

Hey.. I repayed you Jess and Nat..
I did 1 each, before I posted this :P

haha as for you Kaylee, I will be glad to comment 2.. since you haven't commented this one yet..

oo, evil! hmm.. we will have to get revenge taleee :P

lol :P

nooo! I'm cool!..

Kaylee:
I read the new poem of yours, and I wrote you better comments for the 2 I had read before.

=O!!

That's mean haha.

But we will have our revenge Jessy. Ye-eah, that's right Darien. We'll get you back lol just you wait and see =P *sticks tongue out at you*

*gasp* but I .. uhhh
am cool?.. wait! I sweat it was uhh..
Jessy's fault!.. for some weird reason..
ahaha

oh well.. its home time!.. might be on later
who knows.. :P

Haha! Don't forget to message me about that poem/song thingy mmkay?

I Did! Beautiful Job

alrighty Darien, finally home, finally read it.

Sorry for the delay..
wasn't too sure when the site came back up..
on my way to read :)

Ok I'm done with everyone.

Anyone else?

Thanks for the comments/corrections:

To answer your question:

I play guitar and piano, and I pretend that I can sing.

Lol. I pretend I can sing too. =D

Lol, that's awesome! I play guitar and piano as well. With the addition of bass guitar and alto sax.

and I too pretend to sing :P

I used to play the flute, but I traded that sucker in for my guitar. I wasn't all that great at the flute anyway. Been playing piano for a while though...

I'm just intruding on your convo.. But I used to be able to play a little bit a bass =D lol ..I feel proud of myself.

we should make a band. or well, if Darien wasn't already IN one we could. =P

Er Darien, Why'd ya have to already be in a band.

We coulda been famous! But, nooo. You have to already be in a band. =P Haha.

Lol

Blame me, sheesh! Why is it always my fault!?
"It's your fault Darien, you're in a band",
"It's your fault Darien, you tricked us into reading your poems and then makign a deal after"
"It's your fault Darien, because I hate you"

ahahaha, ok I'm done.
We can make a band! We just need a drummer.

sdghjsdfg.

I played drums too =O

But, I'm not good at any of that. I just can't really read music that well...

and, it's your fault that I fell over too. I tried to jump on your hair. but I missed.

{haha, you probably have NO idea what im talking about}

My roommate's brother is a fantastic drummer.

One of my best friends, Sara. She's a REALLY good singer................

And there we have it. Our band. Uhh, Nat, you could umm, be back-up vocals? hehe .. or write our lyrics!!!.. yeahhhh write our lyrics!! woohoo!!

and what the?.. jump on my hair?.. hehe my hair has bounce!.. weeeeee :P

Back-up vocals? Are you saying I'm a bad singer.. =(

Haha!

Ahh, yeah. Your hair lol. You'll know what I'm talking about when you get on myspace. Lol..

Rotfl

geez, now I think I should go home for lunch and check it at home!.. haha

the suspense will grow

Haha. I can't really 'say' what im exactly talking about.. cause it's a rude word and I don't wanna get in trouble on here.. ..You'll just have to wait untill you get home =P

lol haha ok cool :P

Ha!

I'm listening to the Moulin Rouge Soundtrack {I don't why though} Yeah. that was random and weird? Okay, I'll go now..

good soundtrack and movie

*nods* I know! I had to study the movie for dancing ages ago. It was fuuuuun lol

dance dance.. *pukes*

ohhh geez, that song got annoying fast.

Ewwww. Clean that up Darien =P

hahaha .. awww :(

*cleans up mess*
ewwww...

Akk.. ok I have a verse for you :)

Eww. hahaha!

You do? =O!!!! Finally. lol

private message me it. So no one steals it lol

yea. I'd steal it.

btw nat, Quarrelsome Awakening was about the sunrise. That's all.

And in So it Goes, we didn't have each others stanzas to look at... or well they had mine to look at... they're just dumb. =)