New Poem: "Wedding Dreams" 2 for 1

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Hey everyone,

    I just wrote a new love poem called "Wedding Dreams". If you r/r/c on that poem, I will return the favour on 2 of your poems. Just leave me a comment right here, so I'll know who wants the deal :P

    thanks!

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    urgg..why did i comment the poem! :P

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    hehe, I already got your new poem :P
    haha so we're even! :D

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    I did a few before you posted this does that count lol

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Oohhhh!! I've already done it. =(

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    yupp.. :P i guess soo.

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    hahaha .. ohh man I win!..

    Hey.. I repayed you Jess and Nat..
    I did 1 each, before I posted this :P

    haha as for you Kaylee, I will be glad to comment 2.. since you haven't commented this one yet..

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    oo, evil! hmm.. we will have to get revenge taleee :P

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    lol :P

    nooo! I'm cool!..

    Kaylee:
    I read the new poem of yours, and I wrote you better comments for the 2 I had read before.

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    =O!!

    That's mean haha.

    But we will have our revenge Jessy. Ye-eah, that's right Darien. We'll get you back lol just you wait and see =P *sticks tongue out at you*

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    *gasp* but I .. uhhh
    am cool?.. wait! I sweat it was uhh..
    Jessy's fault!.. for some weird reason..
    ahaha

    oh well.. its home time!.. might be on later
    who knows.. :P

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Haha! Don't forget to message me about that poem/song thingy mmkay?

  • LadyPearl
    19 years ago

    I Did! Beautiful Job

  • Sean Allen
    19 years ago

    alrighty Darien, finally home, finally read it.

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Sorry for the delay..
    wasn't too sure when the site came back up..
    on my way to read :)

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Ok I'm done with everyone.

    Anyone else?

  • Sean Allen
    19 years ago

    Thanks for the comments/corrections:

    To answer your question:

    I play guitar and piano, and I pretend that I can sing.

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Lol. I pretend I can sing too. =D

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Lol, that's awesome! I play guitar and piano as well. With the addition of bass guitar and alto sax.

    and I too pretend to sing :P

  • Sean Allen
    19 years ago

    I used to play the flute, but I traded that sucker in for my guitar. I wasn't all that great at the flute anyway. Been playing piano for a while though...

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    I'm just intruding on your convo.. But I used to be able to play a little bit a bass =D lol ..I feel proud of myself.

  • Sean Allen
    19 years ago

    we should make a band. or well, if Darien wasn't already IN one we could. =P

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Er Darien, Why'd ya have to already be in a band.

    We coulda been famous! But, nooo. You have to already be in a band. =P Haha.

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Lol

    Blame me, sheesh! Why is it always my fault!?
    "It's your fault Darien, you're in a band",
    "It's your fault Darien, you tricked us into reading your poems and then makign a deal after"
    "It's your fault Darien, because I hate you"

    ahahaha, ok I'm done.
    We can make a band! We just need a drummer.

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    sdghjsdfg.

    I played drums too =O

    But, I'm not good at any of that. I just can't really read music that well...

    and, it's your fault that I fell over too. I tried to jump on your hair. but I missed.

    {haha, you probably have NO idea what im talking about}

  • Sean Allen
    19 years ago

    My roommate's brother is a fantastic drummer.

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    One of my best friends, Sara. She's a REALLY good singer................

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    And there we have it. Our band. Uhh, Nat, you could umm, be back-up vocals? hehe .. or write our lyrics!!!.. yeahhhh write our lyrics!! woohoo!!

    and what the?.. jump on my hair?.. hehe my hair has bounce!.. weeeeee :P

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Back-up vocals? Are you saying I'm a bad singer.. =(

    Haha!

    Ahh, yeah. Your hair lol. You'll know what I'm talking about when you get on myspace. Lol..

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Rotfl

    geez, now I think I should go home for lunch and check it at home!.. haha

    the suspense will grow

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Haha. I can't really 'say' what im exactly talking about.. cause it's a rude word and I don't wanna get in trouble on here.. ..You'll just have to wait untill you get home =P

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    lol haha ok cool :P

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Ha!

    I'm listening to the Moulin Rouge Soundtrack {I don't why though} Yeah. that was random and weird? Okay, I'll go now..

  • Sean Allen
    19 years ago

    good soundtrack and movie

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    *nods* I know! I had to study the movie for dancing ages ago. It was fuuuuun lol

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    dance dance.. *pukes*

    ohhh geez, that song got annoying fast.

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Ewwww. Clean that up Darien =P

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    hahaha .. awww :(

    *cleans up mess*
    ewwww...

    Akk.. ok I have a verse for you :)

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Eww. hahaha!

    You do? =O!!!! Finally. lol

    private message me it. So no one steals it lol

  • Sean Allen
    19 years ago

    yea. I'd steal it.

    btw nat, Quarrelsome Awakening was about the sunrise. That's all.

    And in So it Goes, we didn't have each others stanzas to look at... or well they had mine to look at... they're just dumb. =)