New Poem: "Wedding Dreams" 2 for 1

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    nooo.. taleeee, thats not faiirr :P

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    oooh ok. My comments suck..

    Lol.. It is fair Jessy =P So then, when we're done. It'll be a big surprise. Lol

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    haha.. :P

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    haha, I wouldn't let you steal it Sean.

    I'm sure you and Jess could whip up a collab too ;P

  • Sean Allen
    19 years ago

    I can't whip up an anything right now, my inspiration is coming in bits and phrases.

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Same with me..

  • Sean Allen
    19 years ago

    it could be sleep deprivation... my girlfriend kept me up most of last night on the phone.

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    lol.. yea, his part would be awesome and then mine would be like.. badd.. lol :P people would be like.. what happened to this end of the poem? :P

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Lol.. Darien? If you're private messaging me it. Tell me when you have. Cause everything from p&q goes into my junk folder....

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    ohhh man I know what you mean Sean..
    my girlfriend kept me up too.. and I have to work now.. gah..

  • Sean Allen
    19 years ago

    yeah, I'm at work as we speak... shows what sleep dep. does to my work ethic.

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    I'm at home?

  • Sean Allen
    19 years ago

    lucky duck.

    thanks for reading my older poems... sometime soon i'll ask you for another list... but not right now -- i'm wallowing in self-pity ;-)

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    I am a lucky duck.

    I might go waddle to the kitchen to get something to eat. But I just hope I don't wake my dad up.. cause.. my bedroom door is like.. err. I broke it? I dunno.

    I'll be back sooooon..

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    haha you should go waddle to your junk mail and read the verse I sent you : P

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    well, lookie lookie, it's lunch time folks..

    unfortunately I can't go home now.. *sigh*
    but I'm off to grab something to eat.

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    woo! I got it =D

    It's awesome as!

    The only line that felt off. was 'So pick the right ones' ...but yeah. it was good!

  • Sean Allen
    19 years ago

    *jots down 'So pick the right ones' and waits for more clues*

    Yeah, it's around lunchtime for me too.

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Haha!

    Err. Darien?

    I'm gonna try and get a bridge alright?

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    ok. I sorta came up with a bridge? I don't know if we're using a bridge or not though.. I'll send it to you..

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    oo, your making me all curious! :P

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    oooh. Really? Tehe =P

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    haha.. please feel free to change ANY lines you want to Nat!! .. I want this to be OUR collab!! lol
    so change whatever you want, and send it to me :D

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    haha.. alright.

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Mmkay. I changed a little bit.. I dunno if it's good or not.. But I'll send it mmkay.

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    got it!.. ok cool lets start writing some more!

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Alright lol..who's starting the next verse?

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    okay, well i got 4 lines.. but they're not that good?

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    lol.. umm doesn't matter.. we can re-arrange it and stuff :D

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Lol..okay =P ..I sent you the four lines that I had.. lol

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    alright cool.. I'll see what I can do with it :)

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    urgg.. the suspense is killing me :P

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    argh.. i didnt get it yet :(

    muahaha I'll add more suspense..
    I have a poem.. but im not gonna post it til monday :D

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Eh? Maybe I didn't send it. I thought I pressed send. Maybe I didn't? ..I'll try again lol.

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    lmao!.. haha yeaaa just incase it didnt get to me..

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Lol..well I just sent it again =D

    ..Where did Sean go? :/

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Awesome! I just got it :)

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    koolizm! I got yours!

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    nooo.. darienn! :@ tehee.. you are killing me heree! :P

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Aye Jessy!

    I have {5} poems that I'm not posting untill next week. =P