my new poem

  • Liam
    19 years ago

    Can anyone give me feedback on my latest poem "look back"

    good and bad feedback appriciated!

  • Liam
    19 years ago

    and if like the person who just voted, your gonna rate it 1, can u at least comment and say why?

  • RetroRavey
    19 years ago

    I will sure read your poem sir-ness!

  • Liam
    19 years ago

    thank you very much, ive just gave a couple of yours a read

  • RetroRavey
    19 years ago

    tahnks for your comment! =D

  • BlueEyedMystery
    19 years ago

    sure i'll do it! :)