New Poem: "Wake up, Break down [Lyrics]" 2 for 1

Hey everyone,

I wrote some lyrics to a song I'm trying to write. I just need to rent an acoustic guitar, or maybe even buy or borrow.

The poem/song is called "Wake up, Break down",
so if you r/r/c on it, I will return the favour on 2 of your poems. Thanks!

Darien

Lol... I'll do it soon.. I'm nearly finished writing one. =) Lol

Thanks Jess!

I did your newest one, and one of your older ones.

Done. =D Lol..

Hmm.. Since you can't really do any love poems, can you do muh new one =) Lol

Thanks Nat,

Read your newest (which was amazing)
and one of your older featured poems!

Thanks!

hey D...I left ya my comment earlier!!!

I commented on it...very well done I might add!!!

Done Laura!

Done Brianna!
*runs over and gives her a hug*
Thanks!!!!

*falls asleep in her lap*
...... zzZzzZZzzz........

Done! *colorsofmylife*

That's everyone!..
anyone else wanna give it a shot?

Errrrr.........I can't =(

hehe, no probs Breezy :D

I got your email Darien =D

Erm, a few minutes pass 8..

8 am .. lol

=O!!!!!!!!!!! woo!

*Adam runs in through the door. Everyone stops and looks at him. After a few mintues of huffing and puffing, he calms down a bit*

Moses: Adam, what's wrong with you? Why did you come rushing in here?

*Adam still trying to catch his breath*

*Jesus walks over and pats him on the back*

Jesus: You are alright now.

Adam: Terrible news everyone! Eve left home today, she said she was fed-up with everything and just walked out on me.

Moses: Adam, what did you do!?..

Adam: I was telling her a story, but she stormed out. She asked how my day was, I said I was tired, and I had something to tell her. I went on to say, work was tiring, and I just wanted to get home and I was in a rush.

After that I paused, remembering a story, I said, Honey I have something to tell you. I smiled a bit. Then said, "I fingered a girl today." She looked at me and stormed out. I didn't even get a chance to explain myself!

Jesus: Adam! That's terrible, it's a sin to cheat on your wife, I am ashamed of you.

Adam: Wait! That's not the whole story, there's more to it!! "I fingered a girl today. She flipped me the finger, so I fingered her back!"

Moses: Yeah, I figured it was something like that.

Adam: Really? You believe me Moses?

Moses: I do! What girl would let you in 5 feet of them!?..

Lmfao!!

Where do you get all those things? Lmao!!

Anyone else wanna read?..

I'm bored.

My club thingy is being boring.

And, my mice are being boring.

Same! And my mouse is running all over me.. lol.. but his sooo cute =D

omg.. I wanna scream!

I want work to finish, so I can go home!!

I wanna go to sleep! Lol

woOo0ohO0oOo.. its lunch time!

Oh yeah.. I didnt actually leave yet.. but I will now!!

immm back!.. wooo

Almost home time :P hahha
ohhh well... ewww its raining!..

Does anyone know how to get rid of a headache if there's no panadol???

Sleep!!!!! weeeeee :)

hahaha well, I get some when I go home.. in

right now!!! sweet!

Haha! I tried sleep. But that didn't work lol

Anyone else!?!?..

Done.

If you could comment on any of my newer poems, that would be great.

Thanks

--Steph

Done!.. thanks :)