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Name : Nelle
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Nelle
19 years ago

Yall i have a very very very big request..me and my friend just wrote a poem It's called " My wrists are continuously bleeding part one and two" Its really long, b/c its on two different pages...but please please please take the time and r/r/c we worked REALLY hard on it!!! i will most definitely return the favor + 3 more! thanks

OK WE JUST WROTE A NEW ONE..ITS CALLED
SUICIDE IS PAINLESS
PLEASEEEEEE R/R/C THAT ONE TOOO, I WILL RETURN THEM!!!!!!!!!!

- Name : Poetic Tragedy08
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Poetic Tragedy08
19 years ago

sure! why not i have nothin better to do, do any of mine, thanks!

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- Name : Nelle
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Nelle
19 years ago

Ok, i will do yours now..but make sure you read both parts, or it mite not look right lol thanks

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- Name : Poetic Tragedy08
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Poetic Tragedy08
19 years ago

You're one heck of a great writer, anyone thinkin on this do it! they're awesome, it hink i'm ganna have to put you in my favs!!

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- Name : Nelle
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Nelle
19 years ago

hehe thank you...it took us about an hour to do that!! it really means a lot!

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Poetic Tragedy08
19 years ago

no problem! just givin it the props it deserves! awesome job!

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- Name : Nelle
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Nelle
19 years ago

aww Thanks =)

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- Name : Nelle
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Nelle
19 years ago

Oh yeah, i did yours too they were great!!! you are a great writer

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- Name : Poetic Tragedy08
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Poetic Tragedy08
19 years ago

lol thanks a tun i read 'em!! *hugs*

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- Name : Nelle
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Nelle
19 years ago

COMEEEEEEEE ONNNN PEOPLEEEEEEE DONT YALL WANT COMMENTS?!?!!?!?!?

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- Name : Darien
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Darien
19 years ago

beg of me?.. are you on your knees!??!?.. rotfl

hehehe jks jks :P

I'm on it :)

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- Name : Darien
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Darien
19 years ago

Done!! Wow, that was an amazing write!..

hehe I try Breezy

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- Name : Nelle
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Nelle
19 years ago

did you dooo both parts or just one?? and i just did your poems tooo =)

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- Name : Darien
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Darien
19 years ago

Whoa!.. totally missed part 2.. on my way!..
woohooo!!.. this is going to be great!

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- Name : LadyPearl
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LadyPearl
19 years ago

I Did, Great job!
Please do

-Finally spilling out my Heart
-Oh, you know how to make me laugh
-beautiful death

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- Name : Nelle
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Nelle
19 years ago

Peopleeee yes, there is a parttttt two!!!!! =) =)

Ok, i will do them now!

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Name : Darien
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Darien
19 years ago

Alright!! I just finished part two!.. omg ..
I think I left a comment just as long as your poem :P teehehee jks!!..

oh man, that was great. I know my comment was long, and it probably didnt make any sense, but I hope it helps.

- Name : Nelle
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Nelle
19 years ago

OK THANK YOUUUUUUUU

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- Name : Nelle
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Nelle
19 years ago

Ok..done

Anyone else????

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Name : AnnMarie
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AnnMarie
19 years ago

This was a really good poem there was a lot of emotion in it! Sorry that it is true life." The gem can not be polished with out friction, nor man perfected without trials" -Chinese proverb

good luck

Please read Forienger, who are you, new me and you pick the last!!!

- Name : Nelle
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Nelle
19 years ago

Ok, done..

Who elseeee ??

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Name : Natalie
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Natalie
19 years ago

Done! ..They were REALLY good.. And REALLY sad.. Whoa!!

Could you please do my latest two? They're called 'Unhealed Wounds' 'Don't give up on yourself' and any other of my newest of your choice. Thanks!! xx.

- Name : Nelle
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Nelle
19 years ago

haha well i did your poems before i read the ones you wanted, but i will go back and do those now!!!

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- Name : Nelle
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Nelle
19 years ago

okkkk did it!!

So, now who's next???

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- Name : Nelle
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Nelle
19 years ago

haha Briannaaaaaaaaa guessss what, baby!!!

I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU =)
bet you didnt know that!!! HA

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- Name : Nelle
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Nelle
19 years ago

GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

OK PEOPLE THIS IS WHAT BOREDOM IS PLEASE READ MY POEM SOO I CAN COMMENT YOURS BACKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK....YOU KNOW YOU WANT COMMENTS! :) :)

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- Name : Nelle
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Nelle
19 years ago

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo now no one will comment my poemmmm they will be to busy with getting comments from youuu GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

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- Name : Nelle
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Nelle
19 years ago

Peopleeeee comee on?????????????

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- Name : Nelle
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Nelle
19 years ago

no body else???? =( =(

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- Name : Darien
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Darien
19 years ago

:(

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- Name : Nelle
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Nelle
19 years ago

Darien..this is sad no one wants to read my poem lol =(

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- Name : Sarah Ann
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Sarah Ann
19 years ago

Read it. Greatttt poem! Please r/r/c on my latest ones, whatever you want.

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- Name : Nelle
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Nelle
19 years ago

Ok, did them!!

ANYONE ELSE????

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- Name : Nelle
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Nelle
19 years ago

People. I am not posting this for myself to readddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

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- Name : Nelle
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Nelle
19 years ago

Please rate this one toooo!!!! Suicide is painless

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- Name : Arcane Blondie
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Arcane Blondie
19 years ago

I read all three---all are amazing

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- Name : Nelle
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Nelle
19 years ago

Thanks, and i did three of yours..if you ever wonna talk..i'm here! =)

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