i need opinionz

i havent written in awhile i jus made a new rhyme nd i need some people opinionz nd look at my old writin nd tell me wat u think nd tell me if u think itz gotten betta or am i slackin or wat ny advice or commentz r welcome please help me thankz :)

i'll take a look, BUT YOU SHOULD POST REQUESTS IN THE REQUEST FORUM!

your writn has gottn betta