Taking it Away

Taking it Away is the name of my newest poem. It's the second poem that is completly rhyming. If you r/r/c it, then I'll r/r/c 2 of yours!

R/R/C 1 of mine = 2 of yours
2 of mine = 4 of yours (etc..)

All done!-Great poem

Please r/r/c my latest poem ''The Lake'' and which ever other one you want to---

Thanks in advance!

ok i commented taking away...you can do any of mine

Pretty Please read *A True Friend Slips Away...* and w/e other one u want to read. and I shall check out some of urs=)

Edit*

Alright it logs me out of the site for some odd reason when I click on love poems but I read it and I'm leaving my comment here!

It was lovely! Very emotional and strong feelings show through. A sweet but dark tone go in it, which makes it very beautiful. I like the Rhyming because it was very creative, not just easy petty rhymes. So I must Applaud you, very, very well done! I give it a 5 for sure!

~+Megan+~

Done. =)

Could you please do "Picture, Perfect" and "Silver Eyes" Thanks. And.. can you please rate too? Thanks. xx.

Hey... I also read *It Started* Which was so extremly amazing! I loved it! but since it was a love poem the site logged me out.
Anyways, it didnt bother me that it didnt always rhyme! because it had a strong message, a strong emotion, such a strong feeling coming through! it was really amazing! I really loved it. I give it a 5=D