New Poem: Hold My Breath {Terza Rima Sonnet} 1 for 2

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Please R/R/C it, and tell me what you think. It's a one for two. =) ..please make sure you rate too. Thanks. xx.

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Thanks Jessy! =P ..I did your two newest.

    Anyone else?

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    *prances around*

    Once I get home !!! :)

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Haha!

    Thanks Breezy. I'll do yours soon. I'm in the middle of writing a collab haha.

    Annnnnnnnnd, Thanks Darien. =P

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Mmkay, Breezy. I did two for you =P Sorry for the delay.

    Anyone else?

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  • J Lau
    19 years ago

    Left comment on your poem. Great work!

    J. Lau

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Thanks J.Lau ..I'll do yours very soon. =)

    Anyone else?

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Mmkay, done two for you. =)

    Anyone else?

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Wow. I'm back.

    Soooo.. Anyone else? Lol..

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Thanks Heather. I'll comment that and another one soon. I -wont- vote. Considering I knew how many votes I had, and.. you didn't vote. =)

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Anyone else?

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  • ~Black*Rose~
    19 years ago

    I did your's and may I say it was very great to read, could you please do my newest one?

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Heather, Did two for you.

    And, Black rose, I did two for you aswell. Thanks alot for your comment. =)

    Anyone else?

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Ohhhh myyy GAWD!.. I just read it :D
    haha.. you owe me nothing!!..

    I think I owe you 2 more :/

    lol I'll read them sometime!..

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Haha!!!! Thanks Darien.

    Yeaaaaaaaaah. I'll be posting another poem soon.. {sad one} and im -trying- to write another love poem haha. but its not really working out that well.. lol..

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  • Tainted Beauty
    19 years ago

    Done!

    Hello my dear! Could you do : Displayed Hatered[eating disorder] and Sins upon my flesh please:)

    -Steph

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Thanks Steph. =) Did those two for you.

    Anyone else?

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