First Poem Since November

This is the first poem I've written since November and I'd really like some critics on it and some praise... It would mean a lot; writings my life and having writers block for that long killed me.

And Now I just posted another. So I've had four since November but I've actually written 'Take Away' and 'The Dreamer' just recently. Check them out please!
Thank you. Have a nice day.

(Yes, I've had people point out that there were two or three others 'written' since November. Just because they were posted on here does not mean they were written at that time...Those were older things I decided to go ahead and post. Thanks)

of course i'll comment and could you do 1 of mine, id like that

I`ll go do it. =D
Please just r/r/c any of my newer featured poems. =D
Thanks!

Samantha Hollywood

Done

Could you please return the favor on Here we are?

-Steph

By the way, I WILL comment on one of yours as well... The more you comment of mine, the more I'll comment on yours. Equal. But I do warn you people, I critize a lot. So don't be offended!

Just post on here how many you commented and I'll return the favor. Thanks guys, this means a lot! I already have another idea and hopefully I can do something with it. Thanks for all the help!