comment 5 and I'll do 10

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    hi,
    i have 5 poems that i would like comments on, You can do up to all 5, but no more, I will comment double, so if you do 1 i'll do 2, and if you do 5 I'll do 10, its easy enough.

    The whisper of your heart
    staring out my window
    I stare at you across the street
    Raindrops
    Sitting on top of the world

    get commenting, I'll look forward to reading the comments and your poems

  • Heather
    19 years ago

    I'm going to do yours right now.

  • Chris
    19 years ago

    I did 3 of yours..they're great !! 5/5 all of em

  • Princess09
    19 years ago

    i did 3 of urs will you please do:

    Despiration
    What has come of the world
    Crimson Tears
    Dasies or Tulips
    the you that belongs to me
    Letter to Mom!!

    Please and thank you!!
    ~~Sweetie

  • Heather
    19 years ago

    I did all of them

  • Tainted Beauty
    19 years ago

    I did all of them, could you do:

    Daddy's little girl
    Night Terrors
    Here we are
    Questions
    My boyfriend, my best friend
    The hardest decision
    Losing my best friend
    Push me
    A war story
    and
    Bulimia

    Thanks

    --Steph

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Hey, Tara, again we meet. I have a trillon featured poems it seems, so I'll comment on five of yours (not including the one I already have) if you'll do at least 7 (or keep your 10) in return. They're rather long though and depressing...But it's how I best write. Please don't critize that.

    Take Care

    xDarkSuicidex

  • Shawna
    19 years ago

    I will go do all 5 right now!! :-)

    If you can r/r/c my
    'November'
    'Don't cry little girl'
    and any other 8 you would like. Actually I think I might only have like 10 posted!!!

    Thanks!! :-)

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    thankyou to all the above comments, i have just finished commenting on your poems.
    Heather: I did 11 of yours, as i misjudged my counting, i hope that the comments are okay, i tried to be honest
    Chris: I loved your poems, and I did 6 of them, maybe later i will read some more
    Sweetcherries09: i commented 6 of yours, and i hope i gave you satisfactory comments
    TaperedDreams: I loved your work, i read the ten that you listed, keep writing
    xdarksuicidex: I tried to be honest with my comments, very good work. I did 10 of yours
    Shawna: I did 10 of your poems, hope the comments are okay, i think you have talent

  • Nelle
    19 years ago

    I will do them babe...but it might take me a lil bit to do them all! =) could you please do

    well actually i dont know..you can do which ever you want! I can't think of names right now! ha so yeah, it's up to you!

  • Nelle
    19 years ago

    kk, i did them! i dont know if i did them all but im pretty sure i did! sorry i lost count lol

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    thanks nelle, yes, you did do all of them. I did 10 of yours, and i thought they were good
    xxx