My first ever dark poem "hospital bed"

hello,
i have written a few sad poems in my poetic life, i have written many poems about life and its troubles, i have written alot more love poems, but never before have i written a dark poem.
It's called Hospital bed, and i would like some honest comments on it.
I will return the favour asap
thanks so much in advance,
love Tara-Kay

I DID ITTTTTTTTTTTTT :D

thanks Nelle, it means alot
xxxxx

You're welcome, my love!!!!! :D

I did it.

Could you do:

Displayed Hatred [eating disorder]

Thanks

--Steph

Done -
Don`t worry about returning the favor. =D
This is a freebie, since you`ve never done a dark poem before.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

ok, i'll do it now, could u plz do "fear"