My first ever dark poem "hospital bed"

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    hello,
    i have written a few sad poems in my poetic life, i have written many poems about life and its troubles, i have written alot more love poems, but never before have i written a dark poem.
    It's called Hospital bed, and i would like some honest comments on it.
    I will return the favour asap
    thanks so much in advance,
    love Tara-Kay

  • Nelle
    19 years ago

    I DID ITTTTTTTTTTTTT :D

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    thanks Nelle, it means alot
    xxxxx

  • Nelle
    19 years ago

    You're welcome, my love!!!!! :D

  • Tainted Beauty
    19 years ago

    I did it.

    Could you do:

    Displayed Hatred [eating disorder]

    Thanks

    --Steph

  • Samantha Hollywood
    19 years ago

    Done -
    Don`t worry about returning the favor. =D
    This is a freebie, since you`ve never done a dark poem before.

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

  • Lady Vengeance
    19 years ago

    ok, i'll do it now, could u plz do "fear"