Larry

Anyone willing to comment honestly on my new write "Larry"?
It's fairly odd, but then again when aren't my poems odd.
I think it's different but in a good way, and slightly touching, well it touched me anyway...

Thanks...I'll return the favour, just say which poem in your honest critique.

Silver J

Anyone?

Done

Could you do

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-Steph

anything from me and id love to

Heya I'll do it please could you comment on my poem 'Sewage of Society'
thank you

What a great piece. How utterly bizarre though.

If you don't mind, could you do:
Indifference (To The World).

Thank you. x

Thanks TaperedDreams, Wings Of Flames, and Kara. Your comments are much appreciated. I've commented on the poems you asked for feedback on.

Sondos, I'm not sure which poem you commented on, but it wasn't my "Larry."

Take care,
Silver J

Anyone else?

I'll return the favour I promise!