Larry

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    Anyone willing to comment honestly on my new write "Larry"?
    It's fairly odd, but then again when aren't my poems odd.
    I think it's different but in a good way, and slightly touching, well it touched me anyway...

    Thanks...I'll return the favour, just say which poem in your honest critique.

    Silver J

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    Anyone?

  • Tainted Beauty
    19 years ago

    Done

    Could you do

    Displayed hatred[eating disorder]

    -Steph

  • Wings Of Flames
    19 years ago

    anything from me and id love to

  • Sondos
    19 years ago

    Heya I'll do it please could you comment on my poem 'Sewage of Society'
    thank you

  • Kara !
    19 years ago

    What a great piece. How utterly bizarre though.

    If you don't mind, could you do:
    Indifference (To The World).

    Thank you. x

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    Thanks TaperedDreams, Wings Of Flames, and Kara. Your comments are much appreciated. I've commented on the poems you asked for feedback on.

    Sondos, I'm not sure which poem you commented on, but it wasn't my "Larry."

    Take care,
    Silver J

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    Anyone else?

    I'll return the favour I promise!