Brainiac Contest! (NOt a TITLE ONe)

Here's some subjects for you to write about.
1 poem per person
Old or New

1. what you feel about War
2. How pressure took over your life at some time
3. Difference between love and Lust
4. How you feel about "idols"
5. How you feel about labels in school (applying to yourself)
6. Things you've done that you blame others for

MUST STATE which Number YOu're Choosing!

CLOSED--

ima do the 1st 1 prob bcuz war bugs me ill do it asap

Sure Brianna

ok im dun!

1.War

Booming of gun, flashing up the night sky,
Fighting from sun up, until the moon is high.
Killing off people, why is this?
Bush, commanding with his hiss.

“Fight for America”, blah blah blah,
Someone PLEASE just break his jaw.
I mean, killing off people, for no reason at all,
Doesn’t he care everyday hundreds fall?

What if everyone, we’re to stop the war?
So everyone can live their lives as before.
So men and women can see their families again,
Someday the end will come, but when?

Blood has already scatted, lives have been lost,
Families throughout America have been tossed.
We should send BUSH to fight, bring the soldiers home,
As the Jewish say “Shalom!”

Peace.

~*W.C?*~

I'm just ME! (the number 5 one)

People can think what they like about me
I'm not really bothered
hating me wont make you pretty
Hun, just live with it

oh my god i wear black!
i like metal bands!
this is me
not poser or goth just plain me

get over yourself
f**k leave me alone
go hate yourself
coz f**k you i don't wanna know

just coz your lifes s**t
don't dump it on me
i don't need your crap
Hun, deal with it

you can get f****d
coz I'm not goth
you can get f****d
coz I'm just ME!

if you don't want swearing tell me and i'll do something else.

Pip xxx

Now They're Gone (War)

Watching fire burn silhouettes alight
Destruction causing chaos in withering delight
Burning to charcoal as a city stands bare
Forgotten in a world with no one to care

Bodies along the streets, dumped and dead
Twisted and broken with memories unsaid
Those that stand here in bitterness alive
Cry their tears upon the souls that died

In this game of war your brothers took part
As bombs rained down, tearing cities apart
Into the war these soldiers were born
Now their names recorded, the boys are gone...

SHIT I DELETED THAT WHOLE POEM CRAPPPPP!

Good joB! Keep it up!

I hope it doesnt have to be new-although i wrote this one yesterday.

# 6

Untitled

It's sad really, how
kids are running around like robots
buying all this and that
spending over 100 bucks
for the 'stylish new hat'

It's sad really, how
being a clone seems to be the trend
thats lasted for all of time
follow the leader, forget your true self,
don't you dare step out of line

It's sad really, how
girls outfits seem to be shrinking,
for all the guys to drool
and all those popular, rich b.tches
seem to be ruling the schools

It's sad really, how
All because of their daddy's money ,
these girls get to be the *best*?
to pick whos worth the time of day
and to torment the rest.

It's sad really, how
no one can show their true colors,
instead they *have to have* that sweater,
from abercrombie and finch
and they dont even know any better.

It's sad really, how
i seem to be the only real person,
the only one who seems to realize
how every trendy b.tch is f.cking fake,
and how M T V is telling everyone stupid lies

I going to try and work on the love and lust one - but I'm not promising anything. When is the deadline?

~Last Strand (Lyrics)~

(Verse 1)
My desires are beguiling,
a fabrication of the truth.
The lies are all compiling,
escaping from the sleuth.

(Chorus)
Can run, but cannot hide,
with every passing stride,
I die a little more inside,
my passion won't subside.

(Verse 2)
My efforts are misleading,
misdirected by my lust.
Yet, you'll find me pleading,
to gain eternal trust.

(Verse 3)
Bonds will soon be broken,
I will not play the tease.
Words I've left unspoken,
will now come out with ease.

(Chorus)
Can run, but cannot hide,
with every passing stride,
I die a little more inside,
my passion won't subside.

(Verse 4)
Words that I've bestowed,
now will be relinquished.
My hearts been overflowed,
with things I can't distinguish.

(Verse 5)
Ties with loosened ends,
will soon settle in my hands.
With each agonizing bend,
I loosen the last strand.

(Chorus)
Can run, but cannot hide,
with every passing stride,
I die a little more inside,
my passion won't subside,
my passion won't subside.

~Sean Dohr~

^Option 3...

2. I'm Going To Make It Through This Year If It Kills Me
by Д βєąµ†ιƒµℓ £ιэ

The sidewalk is so unforgiving...

I've been threatened
with academic suspension
I've lost the respect of my peers
I'm going to make it through this year
if it kills me
I'm going to wait right here

Everyday is a test
Every task, a heart attack
An Honor's level performance
For a mere passing grade
I'm going to make it through this semester
if it kills me

No time for boys
Barely enough time for people
Still it is important to remain open && social
I do so need the attention
of my best worst intentions

I know what I want to be
I know where I want to go
Nevermind who I'll go with
I just need a fucking 2.0

I have wasted so much time
Worrying about all the wrong things
Things that never really mattered
I am going to make it through this year
if it kills me

I never used to be so jaded
I used to have so much faith
I had all the answers for things I knew nothing about

&& deep down I knew it
&& deep down I knew what I was doing was wrong
Now my mind is filled with doubt
Because it worked so well before somehow
I ignored every word you said about another way

&& I can't stop my hands from shaking
From all these pills I'm taking
To eleviate the tension when making
the transition from delusion to reality
I'm going to make it through this life
if it kills me

*wrote it this past semester in the middle of ^^^that.
When is this contest going to be over?

Awesome job you guys!

I'll be judging soon if no one else enters!

Trapped Within (#2)

Like a bird in a cage,
I feet trapped inside.
So many feelings,
Things I had to say.
Voices were surrounding me,
I needed to get away.
I wish I could fly,
Spread my wings,
Free my spirit in the sky.
Get rid of all the darkness
That welled inside.

*it's short i know but i hope u like.. thanx*

Truth (#1)

This world is dead, there is no hope
not one survived not even the pope
the world has been destroyed, the light has faded. what happened to everything God had created?

all this around me can't be true
what happened to everything i ever knew? all these things must be real
it caused wounds that will never heal. we were all paralyzed by our fears, and now we are all drowning in our own tears.

our friends are all rotten, our family dead. we pray to our God, to heaven their led. our life comes down and crashes, all that remains are ashes. every thing's burnt, destroyed, blown up. in the remains of the church lies the bishop.

no love remains, there's only hate.
perhaps in fact, this was our fate.
and after this you'd think they'd stop. the water that's left are just tear drops.

enough blood has shed, please stop this now. go on shake hands, in fact just bow. throw guns away, destroy them all. keep on fighting and you'll all fall.

But go ahead and lay more to rest, at least you'll say you did your best. perhaps there still might be a chance, to rebuild this planet, destroy the trance. but the minute another gun is fired, our hope is gone, our chance backfired

I don't think I'll be able to put one in anymore.. =S I'm busy atm.. =( srr ..

x

I'll wait

no.2 - but now i am found

Engulfed by her welcoming wing,
on her two feet I stand.
Her beauty overshadows me and I
recall the overwhelming jealousy.

My emerald eyes are spiked,
with tears of losing her.
I cower in her wake as she protects
me from my clumsy failed attempts to strive.

Clinging on, I push her away,
and find comfort in her shadow.
I'm taunted by her excellence, although
I'ts always me to paint the picture green.

And then I see the sunlight;
I venture from her loving warmth,
and crawl away from everything I know
to seek my own mistakes in solitude.

Triumphantly I greet the welcome breeze,
uncovering myself, I set her free
and the glory astounds me.

But gone is the laughter together we shared,
the fun that we had and
the secrets we beared.

I miss the amenities friendship provides,
courageous and honest, I conquer the lies.
Pardon my arrogance, Lord
Forgive my deceit,
Your prodigal son has returned. Amen.

(describes the pressures of friendship)

so wen is this gunna end it was on the 2nd page...

sum one should pm noni wang...

How to Be a Somebody
by Sarah Drew

You've got to be perfect
Put on your make-up
Just the right amount

Get your nails done up
Don't forget about your hair
Make sure no hair is out of place

You want to be noticed
So slide on that short skirt
And that little top of yours

Make sure your centre of attention
Come on, you want to fit in right
Put a smoke in your mouth

Take a drink too
Now that they have you smoking
Why not try a little cocaine

How about trying that weed
Everyone is doing it
So why not join in

I mean it's there right
And you want everyone to love you
So you have to be like all the others

Now your going to be sick
Running to the bathroom
You don't make it though

You fall to the floor
You must have drank to much
You have alcohol poisoning

You seem to have overdosed
To much drugs in your system
Now everyone has their eyes on you

Dying on the floor
Someone calls an ambulance
They get there just in time

To watch you take your last breath
I guess you won't be doing that again
At least you were cool for a while

-This poem is based on 4. How you feel about "idols" It more a poem based on peer-pressure and idolizing others. It shows what can happen from trying to be like your "idol" If this poems doesn't really fit, then just ignore it.-

5.

"Don't label me"
by Wings of an Angel

They go around the school, hunting for a prey,
They see a girl, standing alone, she does that every day.
She doesn't have a friend, no one dares to speak,
No one even comes close to her, they just say "She's a freak."
They come closer and closer, they can feel it, feel her fear.
As they come closer, closing up, she just wish she'd disappear.
Other's come closer, they want to see the show, now its all begun.
They laugh and point, they smile and screams, find it very fun.
They found their prey, the lust for blood, this girl is going down.
And there she stands, all alone, looking at the ground.
She can hear what they say, tries to shut it out, but it won't work, she can't stand it anymore,
She hears the words, theyre coming through, bitch, freak and whore.
She lifts her head, slience comes, their eyes are full of lust,
She stares back, cold and hard, filling them with disgust.
"You should be ashamed of yourself, is this all youre worth?
Preying on an innocent girl, is this your call on earth?
How do you dare, how can you try, to tell me who to be?
If you want to speak, speak yo may face, but don't you dare label me!"

Okay, I choose number 2.

Mirror Mirror

I look in at me
I gaze into the mirror
What I see is horrifying
I whimper a cry of terror

The girl I witness
That girl that faces me
That's not my reflection
Can this be a dream?

Alas it is not
That image is what it seems
It is I that sits in the mirror
It's what the world has done to me

My new appearance disgusts me
That image is one I hate
I need to find me again
I need to return before it's too late

But upon my return oh dear mirror of mine
Who is it that thine eyes will see?
Will it be someone new and untrue
Or will I see the real me?

wow i 3got about this wen is it gunna b JUDGED?!

This is love?
:Jenna Elphick.

You look at me, with those eyes of green,
tell me i'm the best you've ever seen,
you're heart beats for me, with lust so pure,
and you say my beauty is your lure.
I feel your hand shaking, as you reach for mine,
getting lost in sweet words and glasses of wine.
You bite your lip as you look me in the eye,
But baby, all your signs are a lie.
You think i will be like the others, i will give it up to you,
but what i really felt, you never knew.
You smiled as you fed me all of your lies,
slowly grazing your hand up and down my thighs.
And tonight is the night, you thought out loud,
and of your success, you seemed so proud.
You made me a pawn and i played the game,
And at the end, i was just another pretty face with no name.
I gave my time to you, stuck around till the end,
but now, ten seconds is all i'm going to spend.
I will tell you that i loved you all along,
but your lust for me was all so wrong.
And i will choke back my tears, and spit up your bullsh it,
for you just did not know when to quit.
I'll do the deed for you and tell you why,
You never did love me, so this is good-bye.

**lol this one was the lust and love one. Number 3**

hmmm

my poem is in the lust and love section, number 3.

What you said, did you mean?
by Shae-Natasha Gilliland

You looked me in the eyes and screamed "i care for you"
You looked at my face and said "I need you"
You looked at my feet and whispered "i love you"
so now i ask you "what you said, did you mean?, did you mean what you said?,
do you really care for me?, do you really need me?, do you really love me?"
you once again looked at my feet and mumbled this time, "yeh".
i said "look me in the eyes and tell me, tell me that you care for me,
tell me that you need me, and tell me that you love me"
You looked into my eyes, but glanced down once again to my feet.
thats where your eyes stayed.
typical of me to break into tears, typical of me to cry.
typical of me to turn away so that not only would i not have to look at this
guy who is making me crazy, i would also save you, the man of my dreams, the
love of my life from seeing the mess mascara makes when it runs...
some time has gone by. we still kiss, we still hug, we still talk.
and i know you dont love me but i cant let you go...

when will this be judged?

Sry, Completely forgot, I've been busy..gone..busy..gone and so forth...I'll get it done by Sat.

thanx

1. Brokenmisery & Sean Dohr

2nd. Dreadingtime

3rd. Who cares....Oscar....mooie Ogen

HW- Lauren
HW-Biscuit