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Ok heres an idea.

depending on how many people enter this contest defines how many comments and votes/rates you get.

~Example~

lets say 20 ppl entered

20 - 1st
19 - 2nd
18 - 3rd
17 - 4th
16 - 5th
15 - 6th
etc

get it?

I want anything and everything
knock my socks off peeps.
peace out
~Emah

The Moon And Stars

The stars and the moon,
Gather around,
For a wonderous dance,
Upon the ground.
They twirl and spin,
Lost in affection,
They dance and glisten,
And turn direction.
Look at them now,
They show their promenade,
Dramatizing their every move,
Across the floor they made.
Show us your masquerade,
Dance until you can't shine,
Light across the sky,
Dance until you can't rhyme.
Oh no, here comes mister sun!
Run back to where you bade,
Oh my little ones,
And gently dance away.

Back In The Ring

Red thoughts running deep in my mind
as i try to run far away from my bitter past
sad eyes of mine has always been so kind
to stay dry when they were forced to blast

sometimes while going back home
it feels as if i am going back in the ring
with a warm embrace to welcome at door
followed by an endless chain of suffering

there are times when i do win but mostly its you
fist of rage with some bloody tears just runs through
i wonder what gets into me to behave like you do
i wish i could change everything, but only if i knew

sometimes while going back home
it feels as if i am going back in the ring
it’s like a kingdom of enemies in one room
and for soldiers of miseries i am the only king

there are times when things seems to be so frightening
it seems as if my entire life has been struck by lightning
but just look at me now, i have become so damn daring
no matter how far i try to run, i come back in the same ring

sometimes while going back home
i realize how my whole world is spinning
this life i breathe is what they call destiny
then why it hurts when i shouldn't be worrying

dreams do shatters but a broken heart needs a healing
trying to climb to the next phase of life but again falling
holding the sands of time but the seconds are spilling
fighting my own desires but i am just so tired of killing

my key to success is behind my addiction of failing
floating in this burning water that i keep on sailing
desperate urge to run away but i find myself crawling
and i end up in the same cage, back in the same ring

Warm And Safe.

You constantly send countless shivers right up my spine,
From knowing that your loving heart is completely mine.
One sweet candy kiss from you is always blown my way,
Touching my soft lips when I can't find the words to say.

So many precious memories can slip through our hands,
But you promise to stay by my side as time withstands.
The whole entire world fades away when I'm with you,
While clearing all the fog around to help me get through.

Our two gentle soft hands reach close to touch each other,
It's you that makes me feel this way; Never another.
I'll always feel blessed that you had come into my life,
Cause you know how to keep me warm & safe; out of strife.

Copyright © Natalie 2006

A Final Prayer
by †!♪~*`Bryce Dressler`*~♪!†

A slow rolling tear
Falling down his cheek
As he stood over her bed
he began to feel weak

He couldn't believe it
No way this was true
He couldn't live without her
He wouldn't know what to do

He dropped to his knees
At the head of her bed
Looked up to the ceiling
Crying he said,

"Why'd you do this god
Why'd you take her from me
I need her so much
Why can't you see

It can't end this way
No, she can't die
God please don't do this
I can't say goodbye

She can't go away
Not here, not now
I'll do anything to bring her back
Please just tell me how

Take the life from me
Take my heart and soul
God please bring her back
I don't care what the tole

Take the blood from my veins
The breathe from my chest
I don't care if I die
Just put me to rest

God please listen
The pain is to much to bare
Her life will end real soon
If at all you care"

He stopped speaking for a minute
As she layed there dying
The only sound to be heard
Was of the teenage boy's crying

His tears crashed to the floor
As he barely made a stand
He reached across her body
And held her hand-in-hand

As he wiped his eyes
He couldnt understand
Whyd this have to happen
Whyd it have to end?

He had one last thing to do
As he watched her lay
He had one last minute
One last thing to say

"I have one more thing to ask
a favor, God, from you
If you are going to take her
Can you please take me too?"

Again he fell to his knees
Not knowing what else to say
He held her hand tight
Not ready to give her away

But then he heard the monitor
Beep for the final time
And after that, all to be heard
Was the single flat line.

He let her hand go
And kissed her on the cheek
As more tears came to his eyes
He prayed they'd soon meet

Although she is in heaven
Past the clouds and above
They could deny him her body
But not their love

And when he gets to heaven
He will soon see
She will be waiting
To be together...Eternally

(C) 2005 Bryce Dressler

Sometimes I wonder...
by J. Lau

If everything happened for a reason,
What purpose did I serve,
When I entered into your life?

Am I just a stranger?
Who happened to be his best friend,
And knew all that happened between you and him?

Am I simply a friend?
Who you were comfortable with,
And had absolutely no feelings for?

Am I the comforter I once described?
Who was there by your side,
And comforts you when you cry?

Am I your guardian angel?
Who guards and help you,
When you needed most?

Am I the soul mate that you need?
Who shared all your joy and sorrows,
And a true friend you can count upon?

Am I the passing cloud?
That happened to be there,
And slowly disappears when the sky clears up?

Am I the rainbow in the sky?
That brings you joy for that brief moment,
And fades away when the sun shines again?

Am I the white Christmas?
That happens only on occasion,
And fulfills a part of your life when all else fails?

Or am I the destined one?
Who will love and cherish you,
For the rest of our lives?

Sometimes I wonder...
How I got myself tangled,
In this complicated situation.

But one thing for sure,
That makes all that I wondered,
Not at all important,
Is that I know... I love you so.

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Scars of thoughts

I thought you feel the same way
That were happy whatever may happy
I thought you love me as much as I know
Do I need to surrender or try to won again

Why did all this things happening
The most saddest and darkest feeling
Why do I need to suffer the consequence's
When all I do is give all I have

How do I pass the sorrows, sadness and tears
When your words marked deep in my skin
Why do we need to be a good friend again
While little by little I'm dying in pain

I still cant forget the things we've shared
I'm not a child who can easily forget everything
You left me a big scars in my heart
And theres no antidote for me to be healed

I'm here dying little by little
My world turns darker and smaller
Because you left me alone in the silence
I dint know what to do, without you I cant

I never thought this thing will happen
How I wish that I was only in my dream
Woke me before all this things is over
You hurt me so badly How it can be healed

I think, think and think like an insane
How did this bad feelings fade away
Hold me hands before the gun shots my brain
Because all I am thinking you hate who I am

I do everything I can, but thats not enough
Because you left a deep scars inside my lonely heart
And it cause to take my miserable life
I'm hurt so badly, fell that I'm buried alive

If only, if only youd look into my eyes,
and see that love for you hidden deep down inside.

i want to laugh with you,
to cry with you,
and hold you for all time.

but shes the one who makes you smile, shes the one you see.
im just a friend, theres no way youd love me.

I dont know how to tell you, or explain about that pain.
You see, it hurts when you walk in the room with her and not with me.

okay i admit it its jealousy im feeling,
but im really having trouble dealing with this love.

once again my dreams are crushed.
once again my heart is squashed.

but still i adore you,
still i dont give up.
Am I crazy or one day will I finally be in luck?
And youll finally feel the same as i have all through this STUPID GAME!

xxALLYxx
ps loved the idea for prizes very original :D

Unfaithful

Baby, I know exactly what you doing,
when your "with the guys", who are you fooling?
Don't think I don't know about her, because I do,
Yet even though I know, I can't let go of you.

I saw you two kissing, late at night in the park,
I saw you two there, even if it was very dark.
That nearly broke my heart, I was just walking my dog,
You were a prince to me, but now just a lowly frog.

How could you be unfaithful to me, after all I've done,
You said you were going to marry me, and I would have your son.
What happened to that? Now you go breaking my heart?
Well, baby that's messed up, this is where we part.

You can have her, she won't be as good as me,
For I loved you so much, but this is the end baby.
You broke my heart, hope she breaks yours,
Hope she is a criminal and steals the stuff from your drawers.

Have a nice life, that you could've had with me forever,
But now it's too late, you and me don't belong together.
So, see you never, I love you none,
I hope you and your girlfriend have fun.

Holding On

When I wanted to let go,
God was there to tell me to hang on a little longer
Something good is going to happen
I just have to hold on to figure it out
I didn’t know what to do
I didn’t know if I could hang on
I waited and waited
And nothing came along
Then one day something happened
I met someone great
He made me feel like I was special
That I was worth so much more than I thought
When I was with him,
I couldn’t help but be happy
He knew just how to make me smile
He always got me to laugh
I will never forget the love he had towards me
He was my best friend
And he became even more as our friendship grew
And now I pray and thank God that he has brought such a gift into my life
Cause I wouldn’t be here today if it wasn’t for him

the sunshine is lost and
I haven't seen you for days

the record's still spinning
repeating and screaming

as it finds its way towards
your hands cupped

in the rain, collecting
faint memories that warm

sizzle pop and then drift
upward; wisps of white smoke

through my fingers, rushing
out an open window

chasing the tail of an endless
ghost, adrift on the wind

as you stumble through a field
of lolling sunflowers: so happy

all broken at the neck
smiling sideways at the sun.

the sunshine is lost, left
searching through shadows

-Something That Had to be Done

Blindfolded...

I walk slowly toward the anger that has manifested itself in front of me.

Shadowed by my present days...

Forsaken in a thousand ways,

I shudder at the (fore)sight of your
up-and-coming cacophonic death.

(Screaming as the wound tears into the deep, dark abyss that is your flesh)

I can smell the sweat on your brow. I don't even need to see.

This blindfold proves to be nothing but a translucent cloth, symbolizing my strengths and your weaknesses.

This is the end, dear.

The end.

Nothing can be reversed.

You failed and now I will complete the failure.

Barrel's raised. Loaded. Cocked.

Goodbye. Try not to be so pathetic in your afterlife.

And remember. I will always love you.

Hah. No, I'm not homocidal. I wrote it in like...10 mins. I was bored and needed to write.

A widows comfort

A path through a haven
Of memories kept,
Flowers of honour
For souls that have left.

With innocent children,
The elderly come,
Floating with emotion
Visitors become one.

A belief in a power
With love they reflect,
Feeling inspired,
They pay their respect.

A widow gently plants
Herself to the ground
Slowly wiping tears
For the love that she found.

A beautiful place
Where serenity lives,
She whispers a thought
Of how hopeful she is.

"I will carry on smiling,
Though your face is gone,
And my memories fading,
But you carry on.

Death is approaching
Old age is so tough
But I know that you're watching
And that is enough.

I cannot feel sadness
When summer is gone,
Cause through this lack of sunshine,
The blossom lives on.

A beauty in pain,
A soft laugh through the wind
I can hear your whisper
I can hear you sing."

A path through a haven
Of memories kept,
Flowers of honour
For souls that have left.

Somber Walk

Shadows tracing trees of bloody leaves
Engulfing the Bright moon in brilliant red
Dripping gold from bags of thieves
Watching as bound young witnesses bled
To the night goddess their cry decieves
Who still lives and who will be dead
Oracles crumbled, shimmered and shattered
Pieces of evidence soaring and scattered

Past massacres and abandoned dread
Past serene castles where flowers bloomed
But traces of vain courting still shred
Any other joyful emotion that loomed
To darkness it's blissful smile is fed
It's old memories and future consumed
Till nothing but seeds hid in the ground
Afraid of thirsty demons coming around

Here lies photos revealing inner pain
Gathered from walks near and afar
Every glimmer of hope has been slain
Destroyed by the Idea of who we are
Cast into fire of this forbidding ordain
Burning tints of emotions raw
Mercy shows no pity on these days
Tangled together in decaying dismay

Blood silently falling like tears from a
Stitch of time, keeping track of her
Days carved oh so deeply into her
Soft, pale, untouched, uncorrupted flesh.

Every memory, laugh, dream
And every fallen tear seared deep
Into her skin, and even deeper into
Her still youthful mind and heart.

Those Razorblade Memories….
Held so very near
Those Razorblade Memories….
She holds so very dear
Those Razorblade Memories….
That comfort only her
Those Razorblade Memories….
Her friend, her end

Every smell, touch, and sight,
Brings back those memories.
Memories of a darker time,
Full of hate and pain…

Re-living each memory, each nightmare
Remembering all of the pain, she
Yearns for a time when, she is safe
From all of the pain she has been caused.

Those Razorblade Memories….
Held so very near
Those Razorblade Memories….
She holds so very dear
Those Razorblade Memories….
That comfort only her
Those Razorblade Memories….
Her friend, her end

Waking up just to paint on
This smile upon her tear-stricken face.
Hiding her pain behind this smile,
Enclosed in her memories…..

Those Razorblade Memories….
Held so very near
Those Razorblade Memories….
She holds so very dear
Those Razorblade Memories….
That comfort only her
Those Razorblade Memories….
Her friend, her end

Keeping track of these memories.
A storybook of flesh wounds.
Covering them behind her innocent
Smile that she fakes daily.

Dreams holding her back from life
And love alike, she hides
Herself behind the plethora of masks.
These Razorblade Memories.

Those Razorblade Memories….
Held so very near
Those Razorblade Memories….
She holds so very dear
Those Razorblade Memories….
That comfort only her
Those Razorblade Memories….
Her friend, her end

Anger will do that to you

He hurt me time and time again
Each time i tried to forget about it
Tried to believe
He wouldn't do it again
But he did
But this time
My anger got the best of me
And my hatred took over
In ways you wouldn't
have thought possible
My anger made a demon
Demon wings sprouted from my back
My brown eyes turned fire red
And my heart turned cold
I became
What my anger was
We became one
I left the earth
And i sat at the devil's right hand
I became feared
Even by other demons
But anger will do that to you

Harms way.
by Sarah

An Angel came one morning,
A visit he did pay.
That angel took my baby,
And tore my heart away.

So innocent was my baby,
An angel in my eye.
My baby didn't whimper,
Only gave a little sigh.

I truly love that baby,
More than words could ever say.
Lord, why did that angel come,
And take my baby away?

The answers, I will never know,
For it is your chosen way.
I know my baby's in heaven,
Safe in your arms, I pray.

Lord, help me to see that light,
So that I may understand.
And when I see my babe again,
It is in your promised land.

Hush my little angel
For I will hold your hand
You sleep so still and peacefully
A world beyond this land

Hush my little angel
They cannot touch you there
Another angel by your side
Deep within a prayer

Hush my little angel
No tear for you to cry
Far beyond this windswept world
An angels lullaby

~Last Strand~

(Verse 1)
My desires are beguiling,
a fabrication of the truth.
The lies are all compiling,
escaping from the sleuth.

(Chorus)
Can run, but cannot hide,
with every passing stride,
I die a little more inside,
my passion won't subside.

(Verse 2)
My efforts are misleading,
misdirected by my lust.
Yet, you'll find me pleading,
to gain eternal trust.

(Verse 3)
Bonds will soon be broken,
I will not play the tease.
Words I've left unspoken,
will now come out with ease.

(Chorus)
Can run, but cannot hide,
with every passing stride,
I die a little more inside,
my passion won't subside.

(Verse 4)
Words that I've bestowed,
now will be relinquished.
My hearts been overflowed,
with things I can't distinguish.

(Verse 5)
Ties with loosened ends,
will soon settle in my hands.
With each agonizing bend,
I loosen the last strand.

(Chorus)
Can run, but cannot hide,
with every passing stride,
I die a little more inside,
my passion won't subside,
my passion won't subside.

~Sean Dohr~

I have this story I tell
When someone asks why
I put myself through hell
Or why I wanna die

It all started one day
Way back in the 6th grade
Thats when I had my first encounter
With my lovely little blade

It was one of those days
Where you regret what ever you say
Where nothing goes your way
Just another normal day

The day I learned how unforgiving
God can trully be
And all the spite and hate
He was saving just to give to me

It was around lunchtime
When I was called to the office
And was told about a crime
That was full of passion and malice

Earlier that morning
My father hit bottom
And started drinking and swearing
Pretty soon mother began yelling
So father started shouting
And before either of them knew it
They were face to face, fist fighting
Mother was scratching, bitting, and slapping
Father was hitting, kicking, and laughing

Father got tired
And grabbed a knife
He slashed up his wife
And brutally ended her life

He left the knife in the sink
And wrote a confession in ink
Then left without a blink

I've never seen him since
But still I slit my wrist
And try to hide the evidence
That I'd rather not exist

~Jacob Judd~

Ok before Im all poemed out this contest is CLOSED
very short i know and thoise who didnt get the chance better luck nxt time.
there will be many more!
cya rojund tiddly peeps.
~Emah

whats the ranking?

This may take me a while cause I've got a lot of family problems and assignments due this monday so hopefully nxt week ill do it.
cya round peeps
`Emah

ok thanks

and now the winner is!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
who?????????????