A stretched time

  • Chris
    19 years ago

    Please respond and I'll return the favor for whatever you do and how many. thanks

    God Bless

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    I've commented on your poem.

    Please read any of my featured poems. Thanks.

  • Michael D Nalley
    19 years ago

    please read rate and comment on 'Life As We Know It'

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    Chris,

    Took me a while to understand what you wrote in my comment but I've finally figured it out.
    It's good that you alter your styles from poem to poem. However, the one you used isn't entirely new to me and one I've seen enough times to know it doesn't work for me. Thats all.

    Take care,
    Silver J