Gone

Please read my newest poetry addition it's called "Gone."

Not sure about it myself so I'd appreciate any suggestions.

I'll comment two of yours if you do this one for me (Just leave titles below).

Thanks,

Silver J

I'll check it out!

Would u mind reading *A Torment So Deep...* and *I'm Free...* I would be very thankful=)

~+Megan+~

Thank you Megan. I've left you comments on those poems.

Anyone else please?

Done. =)

If you could please do "Fading Away" and "Heavens Gates" That would mean alot. Thanks. xx.

Thanks supergirl, I've commented on those poems.

Anyone else please?

Thanks! ...I appreciated your comments. They meant alot and were really helpful. =)

distant powers and...sub-conscious
thanks in advance
~Emah

Wings Of Flames thanks for the comment.

I've just commented on sub-conscious. I appear to have previously commented on distant powers, so is there another one you want me to read?

Silver J

I'll do it! could you please do

Our love
&&
Mixed emotions
Or
you're last chance
Or I smile this smile

Lol sorry i didnt know which two to tell you, ,so its up to you! thanks

Ohhh yeah..The numbers..it is supposed to explain like how many times he did that! like 15 is all the times he said he loved me and so on that is what that means! lol

Right, I see. Maybe you could add that in to save other people getting confused?? I thought it was good anyway, despite me not understanding the number thing.

I really like the poem. You have a great way with uncustomary words.

Do whatever of mine you'd like, more recent the better.

:)

Thanks Melissa for your comment (it did make sense).
I've commented on two of yours!

I really liked "Fond Memories," I encourage anyone to read it now, they won't be disappointed -- I wasn't.

Anyone else???

beautiful write.
do anything of mine you fancy.

I did it!
could you please do "Your Slave"
Thanks!!

Thanks goddess-glamourpuss and Bridgette for your comments.

I've commented on your poems.

Anyone else?