Honest Critiques

Whomever would like honest critiques and ratings from me, please leave the title of ONE poem at a time, as I am pretty busy. After I have commented on that one poem, you may post another, and so on. Please don't tell me to pick one. Just give me a title.

~BJ~

Could you please do "Heavens Gates" ..It's only very short. Thanks. xx.

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I've commented and rated on your poem. Great job.

~BJ~

How Do You Want To Die?

that's not a question, but the title of one of my poems.
I would appreciate some input on it.
Thanks!

//T.L.//

Bjjjjj my love, can you please do Mixed emotions..Thanksss sweetie!

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I've rated and commented on your song. It was lovely :)

~BJ~

Truest Lies,

I've r/r/c'd your poem. Good job.

~BJ~

Nelle,

I read your poem :) You are so talented, hun.

~BJ~

Please do "Gone" I really need suggestions on that one.
I'll return the favour I promise.

Could you do "Friend" for me ?
Thanks
Will check out one of yours now

sarah,

I've r/r/c'd your poem. Good work :)

~BJ~

Silver J,

I've r/r/c'd on your poem. Very insightful :)

~BJ~

goddess-glamourpuss,

I've r/r/c'd your poem :) Keep writing

~BJ~

LadyBlodeuwedd,

I've r/r/c'd on your poem. Very nice for a first attempt. Keep writing!!

~BJ~

.ღ. вяiαииα .ღ.

I've r/r/c'd that poem. :)

~BJ~

can someone r/r/c one of my poems called "unexplainable"? ....thanks....
I'll return the favor!!!

Lisa,

I've r/r/c'd on your poem.

~BJ~

Fond memories

Melissa S. Masucci,

I've r/r/c'd on your poem.

~BJ~

'Not Sure Of A Title'

My newest one.. I couldn't [obviously] think of a title for it, but no one's commented or rated it. So have fun.

Thanks.

xDarkSuicidex

xDarkSuicidex,

I've r/r/c'd on your poem. I can see why it's hard to find a title for that... Sorry I can't think of one that fits either... =/

~BJ~

If you could please do "Heavens Gates" ..that would mean alot.

Is there any poems you'd like me to do?

Thanks! And if you want to do a long one that's more of a story/journal you can read 'The Dreamer'. It's a part of a story, but I wanted comments on it...I think you'll like it but it's very long. If you don't do it, I understand.

And thank you for the first comment...I commented you back. =)

xDarkSuicidex

xDarkSuicidex,

I've r/r/c'd on that for you. :). And thanks for your comment. :) Btw, I do know what you mean about the friends thing, instead of a guy. To be honest, it was about my ex-best friend. I never dated him.

~BJ~

ღ s υ ρ є я g ι я ł ღ,

I've r/r/c'd on that poem already, so I instead r/r/c'd on "Eleven Months." You can do "The Call" if you'd like. Thanks :)

~BJ~

Celestial tears Deana - I am new to this but
I really want honest criticism

Hi can you please do "Hidden World"=D...thankyou i look forward to reading what you think of it && in return just post a poem that you would like me to do=)

Thanks, BJ. =) ..I did the one you asked. It was great. xx.

Deana,

I've r/r/c'd on your poem.

~BJ~

MaLuV4uIsEnDlEsS,

I've r/r/c'd on your poem. If you'd like, you may do "The Mysterious World." it's also a dark poem, but mine is not nearly as good as yours.

~BJ~

ღ s υ ρ є я g ι я ł ღ,

Thanks :) And btw, that poem was very true. Each and every word.

~BJ~

THE LUCKIEST GUY
please and thank you

goran,

I've r/r/c'd your poem.

~BJ~