Honest Critiques

  • BeeJay
    19 years ago

    Whomever would like honest critiques and ratings from me, please leave the title of ONE poem at a time, as I am pretty busy. After I have commented on that one poem, you may post another, and so on. Please don't tell me to pick one. Just give me a title.

    ~BJ~

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Could you please do "Heavens Gates" ..It's only very short. Thanks. xx.

  • BeeJay
    19 years ago

    ღ s υ ρ є я g ι я ł ღ

    I've commented and rated on your poem. Great job.

    ~BJ~

  • Truest Lies
    19 years ago

    How Do You Want To Die?

    that's not a question, but the title of one of my poems.
    I would appreciate some input on it.
    Thanks!

    //T.L.//

  • Nelle
    19 years ago

    Bjjjjj my love, can you please do Mixed emotions..Thanksss sweetie!

  • BeeJay
    19 years ago

    .ღ. вяiαииα .ღ.

    I've rated and commented on your song. It was lovely :)

    ~BJ~

  • BeeJay
    19 years ago

    Truest Lies,

    I've r/r/c'd your poem. Good job.

    ~BJ~

  • BeeJay
    19 years ago

    Nelle,

    I read your poem :) You are so talented, hun.

    ~BJ~

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    Please do "Gone" I really need suggestions on that one.
    I'll return the favour I promise.

  • goddess-glamourpuss
    19 years ago

    Could you do "Friend" for me ?
    Thanks
    Will check out one of yours now

  • BeeJay
    19 years ago

    sarah,

    I've r/r/c'd your poem. Good work :)

    ~BJ~

  • BeeJay
    19 years ago

    Silver J,

    I've r/r/c'd on your poem. Very insightful :)

    ~BJ~

  • BeeJay
    19 years ago

    goddess-glamourpuss,

    I've r/r/c'd your poem :) Keep writing

    ~BJ~

  • BeeJay
    19 years ago

    LadyBlodeuwedd,

    I've r/r/c'd on your poem. Very nice for a first attempt. Keep writing!!

    ~BJ~

  • BeeJay
    19 years ago

    .ღ. вяiαииα .ღ.

    I've r/r/c'd that poem. :)

    ~BJ~

  • Lisa
    19 years ago

    can someone r/r/c one of my poems called "unexplainable"? ....thanks....
    I'll return the favor!!!

  • BeeJay
    19 years ago

    Lisa,

    I've r/r/c'd on your poem.

    ~BJ~

  • Melissa S. Masucci
    19 years ago

    Fond memories

  • BeeJay
    19 years ago

    Melissa S. Masucci,

    I've r/r/c'd on your poem.

    ~BJ~

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    'Not Sure Of A Title'

    My newest one.. I couldn't [obviously] think of a title for it, but no one's commented or rated it. So have fun.

    Thanks.

    xDarkSuicidex

  • BeeJay
    19 years ago

    xDarkSuicidex,

    I've r/r/c'd on your poem. I can see why it's hard to find a title for that... Sorry I can't think of one that fits either... =/

    ~BJ~

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    If you could please do "Heavens Gates" ..that would mean alot.

    Is there any poems you'd like me to do?

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Thanks! And if you want to do a long one that's more of a story/journal you can read 'The Dreamer'. It's a part of a story, but I wanted comments on it...I think you'll like it but it's very long. If you don't do it, I understand.

    And thank you for the first comment...I commented you back. =)

    xDarkSuicidex

  • BeeJay
    19 years ago

    xDarkSuicidex,

    I've r/r/c'd on that for you. :). And thanks for your comment. :) Btw, I do know what you mean about the friends thing, instead of a guy. To be honest, it was about my ex-best friend. I never dated him.

    ~BJ~

  • BeeJay
    19 years ago

    ღ s υ ρ є я g ι я ł ღ,

    I've r/r/c'd on that poem already, so I instead r/r/c'd on "Eleven Months." You can do "The Call" if you'd like. Thanks :)

    ~BJ~

  • Deana
    19 years ago

    Celestial tears Deana - I am new to this but
    I really want honest criticism

  • LockedInEternity
    19 years ago

    Hi can you please do "Hidden World"=D...thankyou i look forward to reading what you think of it && in return just post a poem that you would like me to do=)

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Thanks, BJ. =) ..I did the one you asked. It was great. xx.

  • BeeJay
    19 years ago

    Deana,

    I've r/r/c'd on your poem.

    ~BJ~

  • BeeJay
    19 years ago

    MaLuV4uIsEnDlEsS,

    I've r/r/c'd on your poem. If you'd like, you may do "The Mysterious World." it's also a dark poem, but mine is not nearly as good as yours.

    ~BJ~

  • BeeJay
    19 years ago

    ღ s υ ρ є я g ι я ł ღ,

    Thanks :) And btw, that poem was very true. Each and every word.

    ~BJ~

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    THE LUCKIEST GUY
    please and thank you

  • BeeJay
    19 years ago

    goran,

    I've r/r/c'd your poem.

    ~BJ~