** A Simple 1 for 2 trade **

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Hey everyone,

    Seems like everyday at work I get some time to read poetry. I love getting comments from everyone, but there is rarely anyone on around the time I'm on.

    If you guys read any 1 of my featured poems, I will read 2 of your poems, of your choice or of my choice. I cannot read love poems at work, so leave me titles of poems of any other topic.

    This is a sweet 1 for 2 deal.
    Thanks,
    Darien

  • Nelle
    19 years ago

    I will do yourssssssssssssss =D i dont care which ones you do its up to you!!!

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Thanks Nelle!!

    I did:
    "I smile this smile"
    &
    "You're last chance"

  • Truest Lies
    19 years ago

    Sure I will. If you can, please comment on How Do You Find The Words and Misery's Door.

    thanks a mil.

    //T.L.//

  • LadyPearl
    19 years ago

    oK!

  • Amanda
    19 years ago

    ok i'll do it. Any of mine will do, Thankyou :D

  • nikki
    19 years ago

    ok ill get right on that. you can do any of mine thnx bundles

    ~nikki xD

  • Tainted Beauty
    19 years ago

    I did Drowning Lessons

    Could you please do:

    I was just a little kid
    and
    Sins upon my flesh

    --Steph

    BTW...why cant you read love poems at work?

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Truest Lies

    I finished your stuff!.. 'AWESOME' stuff :)

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Noni*Wang

    I read "Somber Walk (Ottava Rima)"
    &
    "It's Wrong...We Know "

    I liked Somber Walk alot!

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    *Amanda*

    I read "Sweet 16th Birthday"
    &
    "I am who I am"

    "I am who I am" was a really sad poem. I would hate to have to move 10 times over again. For such a dark and ugly life, you write some beautiful poetry. Keep on writing

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    nikki,

    I read:

    "I miss you more than ill admit"
    &
    "I cry myself to sleep thinking of you"

    You did need some work on both of those poems. You were more or less, venting, and you weren't able to control your emotions well. Also, you really need to write some more poetry! I wanna read something new!!..

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    TaperedDreams

    Those two poems were the most intense reads in a long time. I really was shocked reading "I was just a little girl", I didn't know what to write. Such a horrible story, I can't believe what I read. You hear things like that happening all the time, but I never know to who. I'm really sorry. Great poety though. You expressed yourself well, and you were able to control those emotions. Awesome.

    PS.

    They block love poems because it has something to do with 'dating' and that sort of page gets blocked.

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Anyone else ??

  • Jackie Marie
    19 years ago

    Sure will. :)

    Can you r/r/c my newest one? Thanks Darien!!

    >black&&blue

  • Arcane Blondie
    19 years ago

    I read, rated, and commented on ''The Movie of Our Life''---Great poem!!

    I don't have a preference for which two of mine you do--- Whatever catches your eye---

    Thanks in advance!

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    >black&&blue

    I read "Childish Little Games."
    &
    "I'm Sorry"

    They were both on different sides of the spectrum, one was a bit funny and everyone could relate to it. The other, was a personal story about a passing of a loved one. However, both poems were dedicated in a way, to other people. Which brings out the amazing poet in you. The ability to write about other people from your point of view. People you know and love, you have a good heart, and your intentions are good. Keep writing poetry for anyone and everyone you love.

  • Jackie Marie
    19 years ago

    Thanks Darien. That really meant alot.

    =]

    I love your work too. That is why you are added to my favorites.

    I use my poetry to express my everyday life or just to put out my feelings or thoughts.

    EVERYONE READ DARIENS POEMS *NOW*. =]

    >black&&blue

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Arcane Blondie

    I read:
    "Death, A Majestic Beauty"
    &
    "The Devil"

    Your dark poetry is the most imaginative I have ever read. Your heart does not take you there, but your creative mind does. It does not necessarily mean your thoughts are psychotic, it means you are talented in how you describe ANYTHING. Whether it be dark, or nature or anything mere situation. Really good work with your poems.

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    lol, Thanks Jackie :)

    I appreciate every comment you leave me. Thanks for reading!

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Would anyone else like to join the deal?

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Ok cool..

    This deal is done.

    xX Closed Xx